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Excellent read though, I do wonder with his sisters' multi relationships whether there was more to it.

A very well written storey, which I enjoyed, however my criticism is; this site is called “LITEROTICA” there was no erotica at all in this storey, just a little documentary on the sex. In spite of this I still give this ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.

Awesome.

I just realized how hilarious the new pseudonym was. Not quite 'Hero Protagonist', but pretty slick.

A neat little episode. I'm looking forward to the next one!

This *is* a very different kind of story. It's kind of like a sci-fi James Bond with a bit more plausibility. I don't particularly *like* the protagonist, but he's interesting, nonetheless.

Like coolmonkey24, I didn't guess at that particular scam. My suspicion was that the students...

I don’t know if you still write or not, but this story was AWESOME. I'd appreciate more stories like this.

Okay, the husband is a fool. Now, make lemons for them. Have the Cole fortune work for them by setting Mike up with a serious pay bump and nice new job. Turn the Cole's basement into a cushy sex dungeon where all the fun starts and stops. Have Krissy bring a new woman into the...

This story must have run its course as it dull and boring and no action. Really, this has been extremely slow and the erotica has been substandard. Might as well pull the plug.

This is certainly a different take on the story, but you know, it somehow works. It's a bit too fast paced IMO, and could be slowed down some, but otherwise, it's not bad at all. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

Another extremely well done series. I hope there will be more for this character in the future.

An enjoyable arc. Obviously you have written the entire story and so feedback most likely won't affect future chapters, but here goes.

I didn't see the scam coming. I was anticipating something more....high stakes? Like using the 5th floor for cloning or super computes or something....

Loved it from start to finish and brought back a few memories👍

Nice. Enjoyed the wrap up of the mission and "Maynes" actions

Good read with everything tied up neatly at the end.

Loving this. Please keep it going.

Good writing, good story, bad time to be a Native American. I wonder if the author killed too many characters and lost his muse for the story.

Well done!

I am looking forward to the next chapter.

And thank you for sharing with us!

absolutely splendid. this is really great work, one of your best yet. can't wait for the other chapters.

The man had lung problems he may have passed.

Such good stuff here. Great and varied sex scenes. Emotion where it makes sense, none where it doesn’t. Love Mayne/Thorne’s POV. Sex is meaningful with the women he likes. And not with the women he doesn’t.

Great chapter. And that’s what it is: a chapter. I don’t get the too much/little...

Emotional masochist..Dan deserves what is happening to him. There is nothing worse than an indecisive spineless man ..

This is a story about an emotional masochist

disappointing ending ... life is never that cut and dried ... and what makes Loren think he can just "command" the women, including his wife, to upset their entire lives because that's what he wants, and he has decreed that's good for everyone

I really liked this story, people in changing emotional times, forced to react because of circumstances beyond their control, and finding new feelings for others they never thought they had. A multi-layered story line. Good stuff!

Honestly, I don't understand all the negative comments....

@HaydenD

I just reread the first chapter of Westrons and found that actually his character Cook was quite a bit more asshole than Thorne has started out to be. It also turns out that while Cook didn't appreciate the conformity of the institution, and he didn't appreciate how the...

Very enjoyable! Well done! Finn

Enjoyed the characters and their lives.

Outstanding tale! 5 well-earned stars! Looking forward to his (Mayne's - is that what we call him now?) chapter!

Oh thank God! It was just a Ledger scam, I was afraid we were dealing with sex slavery.

Great chapter. Definitely another 5 Stars from me.

Buuuut when exactly does this tie in to "Westerons?"

Well done! A pleasure to read! Can’t wait for the rest, thank you:)

This is a fun story to read. Henry is a convincing "chad". I like how you strike a balance between assertive and being plain unlikeable.

I'm glad this episode ended. But for good reasons. I like when an author has the guts to tell a story and let it's parts actually conclude. Am I ranting in your comments about other writers? Probably. :)

Not everything has to end in a cliffhanger, and I'm glad this didn't.

I do...

I definitely have to borrow from a poster in chapter 4, where I definitely feel ch 5 confused me in some ways by how it ended. That said, while I still rated it a 5, the feel of it I believe could have been handled better. I'll explain what I mean.

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First Impressions? I'm definitely...

oldwit - The tale includes the music business, otherwise all the people in the tale would be roaming around pointlessly. Thanks Q! 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

Actually, I enjoyed this even better than pt1! Thanks Q.

somewhere east of Omaha

Thank you Q! Enjoyed the first part. 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha