tagFeedback PortalNovels and Novellas

Novels and Novellas Comments

Load newRequesting new commentsRequesting new commentsNo new comments, try later

Latest 15 Reader Comments

The prior comments fit my feelings perfectly.

You never fail to entertain with a smile and more. Waiting anxiously!

I really liked this one, too bad it's unfinished

Update?

I enjoyed this piece, is there an update?

Superb writing - waiting for more

I have now read the five parts on more than 10 occasions; the writing is superb and I am having difficulty waiting for the next chapter. Will they make love before Gwen and Cora arrive?

Great story

Please continue, maybe a three way with some anal

I agree with EXursus

This would make an excellent movie. I love this story.

Good Start

I enjoyed the first chapter. I hope it doesn't take long for the next ones to be approved and published. I don't like having to wait long for the next chapter. Let's just say, I'm NOT a very patient person...when I want something, I want it yesterday. lol

5 stars as normal

WAS GETTING WORRIED AGAIN.
SO GLAD YOU ARE STILL WITH US.
THERE IS ANOTHER STORY HERE THAT I FOLLOWED, AND THE AUTHOR LEFT US BEFORE HE GOT TO FINISH HIS DREAM. I WOULD MUCH RATHER WAIT FOR YOU THAN HAVE THAT CONCLUSION AGAIN. HIS FAMILY ALLOWED SOMEONE TO TRY AND TIE IT UP, AND IT WAS OK, BUT NOT THE SAME.
TAKE ALL THE TIME YOU NEED. JUST KNOW THAT, AS SOMEONE ELSE SAID, WE ARE HERE FOR YOU AND EAGERLY AWAIT THE NEXT ONE.

TOM

---[ THIS WAS NOT AVAILABLE FOR ME UNTIL TODAY. THERE WAS NOWHERE TO ADD COMMENTS. ]---

A Fun Romp

This is an amusing story that does not take itself too seriously. There are issues with switches between tenses and some edting in places would help but there is infectious fun and a suspension of belief throughout. I like the light touch in the writing - we can all read anatomy texts if we want heavy gynocological detail, and those texts have illustrations ...
Keep at it

Well done

Great start. Great writing. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Agree

Yeah me too. A great tale well told.

An Inspirational President ... and then there's reality.

Not surprising HDK has gone quiet since Nov. This story has been about an ideal, one that all of us that have read/re-read this to this point have enjoyed and found inspiring. Good things being done by good people.
Our reality is that the newly elected POTUS doesn't share those values, and is everything that the Lady in Red is not (would love to be proven wrong).
HDK must be sickened (as is most of the world). Commiserations to us all.

nice read. keep up the good work

Too messed up

At some point things were so messed up that I didn't really care what was going to happen. Sorry not my kind of story, I need something to hang up, revenge or reconciliation, I don't care as long as it's well written and believable. you left no way out in your story, they all fucked it up royally. Whatever happens it sucks big time

Too bad Holden and Richard can't go to the future and bring back a cure for Jemma!

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel