Recent reader comments on Literotica Novels and Novellas.
I agree with 1Sam, if a story isn't finished I normally wait and read it later. In this case I hit either writers block or a I'm just getting old. I'm not sure where I want to go, I normally just let it go. The story guides me not me guiding it. In this case it took me down a...
All Comments/ReplyHope this is the opening chapter and there’s more to follow,
Very enjoyable so far 👍🏻
All Comments/ReplyThank you for this wonderful story, 5*. My best wishes for your reconvalescence.
All Comments/ReplyYES!! Wendy and Tom finally do it with her parents. There’s just something of a major turn on for me envisioning Tom fucking his mother-in-law. Not to mention Wendy finally getting it on with her own father!!
All Comments/ReplyAs always, superb.
All Comments/ReplyGreat story, it was fun to read, thanks for sharing. Good luck and speedy recovery!
QBikk
All Comments/ReplyThis delay is due to me being brought into the E.R. And admitted to the hospital with a sepsis infection. I’m still here after over two weeks. Apologies for the delay, thanks for your patience.
All Comments/ReplyVery hot story thank you. I'm delighted that Tom is now taking cock, and eating cunt. He's becoming a good boy!
All Comments/ReplyI like your stories partly because you always mention places I’m familiar with. In this story it was the Highland Park UMC and T.O. Ranch Steakhouse. My family was founding members of the Richardson UMC and I attended several Christmas services at Highland Park UMC. My wife and...
All Comments/ReplyAnother great chapter. This is shaping up to be a pretty interesting mystery story. Keep it up.
All Comments/ReplyMollie,
Thank you so much for your kind feedback! I truly do appreciate it. You have no idea how much I needed to hear that. I just hope the end of the story lives up to expectations.
Hugz,
-Rachael
All Comments/ReplySo this loving wife is practically creaming at the hands of the same people who ruined her life. And she had to force herself to to NOT jump on the dicks of the people she is trying to get revenge on. And the author is wondering why people reacted negatively at the first chapters...
All Comments/ReplyAnd here is the reason so many didn't buy the drug excuse in the previous chapters. Anyone who has dabbled with recreational drugs knows they can't turn a loving wife into a no holes barred slut overnight. That's why there is a disconnect. And at this point you have to assume many...
All Comments/ReplyRape drugs definitely exist. What doesn't exist is the horny drugs usually found in these stories. Rape drugs usually result in an unresponsive, semi-conscious person being molested/raped. Fantasy horny drugs result in a slut riding some douche like a bitch in heat while screaming...
All Comments/ReplyOuch, what a brutal cliffhanger…..
All Comments/ReplyAbsolutely fantastic 5 plus!!!!
All Comments/ReplyEnjoying the story, can also tell the writing is improving. The world building is pretty great, excited to see how things work here.
All Comments/ReplyI used to tell Chemistry jokes periodically.....but all the good ones Argon.
All Comments/ReplyThis is a FABULOUS story...I can't wait for the ending.
All Comments/ReplyIt was good but you left us hanging what about the brother the car and more
All Comments/ReplyDang it! I hate reading a really good story only to find out it isn't complete!!!!!!!!
Grrrr/sarc :)
Really liking this. I do hope you continue this... unfortunately there are many good stories here on this site that are just left floundering in the middle. I know life or worse...
All Comments/ReplyStory is developing very well, hope the next installment will wrap up some of the loose ends.
You have a very interesting way of capturing your audience.
All Comments/Replyhope you continue with The Treehouse as other apocalyptic stories just vanish of the face of the world ********
All Comments/ReplyAnother one in the WIN column! Great story, well written as usual, and a great link the BGH Pundits. 5 Stars all the way!
All Comments/ReplyGreat story. There needs to be more chapters
All Comments/ReplyGreat story.
All Comments/ReplyA very interesting start. Fairly well written. Like it
All Comments/ReplyYou're a highly talented writer! Thank you for such an arousing story!
All Comments/ReplySo. organized cheating. Could also be called swingers under another name. These relationships almost never last the distance. At some point someone catches serious feeling or jealousy. This author seems to have a fascination with cheating. I'm out.
All Comments/ReplyFrankly I think Paul is one dumb SOB
The three women he has so far fuck are nothing I would want to share eternity with. They will not change from the cheating sluts they are.
Give me his instructor any day of the week
And how come this author has not finished the damn story?
All Comments/ReplyWhy didn’t they simply add the shaved magnesium to the explosive mortar shells?. It would have been very effective against their enemy
All Comments/ReplyGlad your body repairs are taking hold & you're getting better.
This story is just as good as all your others, so the waiting is not a problem.
All Comments/ReplyLove it. “She turned and it was Tom. "You owe me for this," he rasped,” Angela was at the party. To enjoy the party and to tell Wendy that - “Tom's debt is paid off, he's free”? I think it turns out he's not owned any more and …...... Wendy owes him a load of back wages. Which...
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