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Geeeezus! This is good stuff!

I'm enjoying the hell outta this story,

Thank you.

Nid

the storyline, the characters, the writingstyle - just perfect. Can´t wait for the next chapter..

Character Depth

I have enjoyed many of your submissions and felt necessary to comment when I read the critique about 'repetitiveness'. For me, your descriptions in this story added to the sensuality of the characters and thereafter to their sexuality. so thank you for developing that in your story.

Orgasms

I know stories exaggerate the ease of orgasms, but this chick cums from giving oral, being kissed, and being hugged. geezus

Good first try

There were a LOT of typos. Work on description rather than describing actions in order of occurrence. Do it in Word or something and it will find the typos for you.

I can only wish there was a chapter every day to start my morning off right. It is going to be interesting to see what Moe's problem is. Obviously they are very compatible, but she has some issue that is not yet revealed, maybe job prospects, maybe age?

Love this story

I don't do this much but I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. As soon as I get done reading one chapter I can't wait for the next one. Hope you keep going. I'm a big fan.

curious2c .... "HOPE" you are still arond ....

and reading the comments so you will understand truly what ....

.****A FIRST CLASS ASSHOLE AND A ANAL CREAMPIE EATING PIECE OF SHIT "YOU" HAVE BEEN AND ARE TO THIS DAY. TAKE YOU CHEATING WHORE WIFE APOLOGIST AGENDA AND MALE HATING, WIMP LOVING STORIES AND SHOVE THEM UP YOUR ASS MOTHER FUCKER!!!!!!!****

When are you gonna post the next chapter
I hope sooner​ rather than later

So glad!

I have been periodically returning to GF during the past few years to search for Chapter 39 of the Touch and today, well, I'm so delighted to find our man is well again and back to his genius writing, Long may that continue!!

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