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FYI, you spelled foe paws right, but it’s wrong. I’m practicing my Captain Obvious persona. :-)

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I really enjoyed this. I’m a sucker, though. I put something in Loving Wives to get more visibility. It was my Christmas story about a truly loving wife.

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My first story was a 750...

Another thing I didn't cover in this piece: crediting the editor. This is a bit of a grey area; in some areas of amateur writing it's considered common courtesy, in professional publishing the editor is often invisible. The editor gives advice but the author chooses whether to take...

Total bullshit I dont care how hot my wife is or how sexually liberated she is if she fucks anyone besides me her husband she is fucking history when you get married you vow to forsake all others that means something to some people

Thanks for your supportive comments. They're much appreciated, as are all the 4s and 5s to date. The experience I mentioned, seeing girls suntanning topless on a roof below, is now in Exhibitionist and Voyeur, "Watching Great Tits from the Office". This short piece uses some humour,...

I’m writing the full version of my 750 word ‘It wasn’t COVID’ story. I’m not as organized as you are, but it’s looking to be a million word story (not sure it if will really be a million, but it’s big). I’m enjoying letting the story take on a life of its own. I’m writing mostly...

Words to live by. Thank you!

What if thousands of marriages were really like this (scolding, nagging and blackmail)? What if thousands of wives are lying and manipulating in ways similar to this?

I saw a movie recently, "Barbie," and all the girls plot to deceive and manipulate all the boys.

I'm just an idiot,...

Hopefully I'll marry a woman who wants to some of these (I'm not into watersports at all, just the idea is blah). Still, I'd have liked more emphasis on being a good husband also on an emotional level, as it can be very confusing as times (women are complex...)

I loved this story. I have wanted to eat my own cum for so long and have the same problem. Somehow, sometime I am going to eat it up myself.

I disagree you can use "CUUUUUMMMMIIIINNNGGG.....", but I would suggest only if your character is an actor playing the part of Frank-N-Furter and the story has reached the seduction scene with Brad and Janet.

Im not sure if anyone has pointed this out, but there are a lot of women who struggle with wetness way before menopause could be to blame. You are correct that orgasms typically bring at least a little wetness (depending on the woman), i just want to add some important things to keep...

Sounds like he loved Dora more than his late wife.

Thanks for this. It's kind of like screen writing script writing techniques. I appreciate you taking the time to share this as i am struggling to write my own story. This is a handy reminder to simplify and be clear.

great start, interesting approach.

Many thanks! I always enjoy the insight authors provide, particularly the articulate ones. As I work towards the courage of writing and posting, I'll be sure to reference this work several times! Appreciate your efforts.

Thanks for this. Not only much good advice but a real incentive to keep writing. (which I have slacked off on). Had I read this before publishing my first story it would have turned out much differently in so many ways. (I've got a 4.18 on it) I have bookmarked this story to use as...

Thank you, @subdudeme13, @Wrstkrfft, and #Excoach for reading, enjoying, and commenting!! 🥰

Thanks for sharing your seasoned perspective. I am a new author to the site, and although I'd love the glamour of a coveted red H next to my stories, I'm never going to go out of my way to try to get one. For me, what matters is what I like, what turns me on, what I find fanciful,...

The delusional power fantasy of a woman who resents men

I discovered I was turned on by cocksucking when I was 20 and I came across a Penthouse Forum letter (in one of the all-Forum little digest magazines) about a cocksucking cowboy. I was literally working as a cowboy and I was both super turned-on and horrified that I found it so arousing....

I have had similar feelings about wanting to share my loving wife for most of our married life. It has not happened and likely will not happen, but this has not diminished my interest in wanting to share her. I was interested in the reasons for feeling the way I do, but honestly I...

Great advice-written in a concise, easy to understand format.It should be on everyone’s reading list.

“Just use the threat of blackmail!”

Lol, this is a good way to get yourself found rotting in a ditch

Some great information here how to write a better story.

It seems so easy but if you aren't an author by trade, actually writing a decent story isn't. Easy, that is.

Thanks, this is quite helpful!

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Very interesting. This reads like a set of variables and values to spin up ideas, which I thought was interesting. I also think you nailed some of the common ideas (not sure if that's good or bad).

But I'd also love to read a list of prompts. Like I was thinking about the ancient...

Thanks for the elaborate advice.

For me personal this makes ones again clear that improving your sex life requires a lot of effort.

Although I tried, this seems not really feasible.

So I'm jealous now how liberated and open-minded you are. Most of my fantasies are a no go for my...

Good read.

Nice.

Nice.

Good read especially the point 7. I met a guy with a finger sized penis and when putting the condom on, he said it feels to tight. Blew my mind cause I thought back then he was definitely lying.

Good read.

Good read.

Good read.

Beautiful and very emotional piece I feel bad for Dora passing.