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Best practical advice ever. I read organizing blogs I Pinterest. Ebooks. N here I find the most succinct useful advice on lit imagine that. Anyhoo thank you for this

Great advice

I had no idea that head hopping was such a no-no in writing. Since fixing that, I think my story has seriously improved.


May I add stripping / striping; barely / barley; and, a particular bugbear of mine, it should be chaise longue, not chaise lounge. It means a long chair and is pronounced shezz long.

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I hope someone shoves a very LARGE soap up your arse and sews it shut.

Descriptive, but not complete

Absolutely nuts!

How dare you!? Women of the world who think this way. This is nothing more than oppression of men and marriage! Reverse the role in your mind game and think how you would feel!

Good advice

I've only read one of your stories, and you attempted to follow your note but failed. However, I liked this piece and believe you have the right/best idea.

Been there!

Definitely a hot story and one I can relate to! Had many of these types of fantasies while in my stand. Might have even ruined a hunt or two by jacking off to them while I was still in the stand lol


That was a hell of a twist! lpol I can see it happening though. Spent many a boring hour in a stand

The real deal?

I think you have are and have been around the block a few times. The number of people I have partially read doing war stories who obviously got their military and weapons training from "World of Warfare" or some other fantasy game drives me crazy. In my experience the Marine Corps gets along best with the Hospital Corps over all other military groups (except when we came at them with a needle). A very old "Doc" who actually earned a doctorate after he found a way to get around the liberal guards at schools that had offered me full scholarships before I got drafted saying that I was not qualified to enter their institution under their new criteria. I served during Viet Nam. Even the US government passed me over 5 times in a row for a job in favor of a foreigner with a barely passing score of 70. I had a 90 on the civil service exam (before adding my 5 points as a veteran). Very well written, with a few minor peccadilloes. Please keep writing!

History of Figging

There is another historical aspect to figging used in punishment of household staff in Victorian times.
The most common form of punishing staff was a caning on the bare bum and the back of the thighs, usually administered bent over a chair or other furniture. This was often done in front of other staff or family members so that both the pain and the embarrassment of having their bum bared combined to increase the punishment. However, this presented a dilemma as the skin on the thighs and bum are drawn tight and this, combined with clenching, increased the likelihood that the cane would seriously cut the skin and cause serious injury and prevent the victim from performing their duties. This is where figging came in.
When the ginger was inserted into the anus, it prevented clenching because any clenching caused the sensation of burning to increase significantly. With the bum relaxed, more caning could be administered without causing serious injury. The figging added yet another element to the punishment (both having it inserted in front of other as well as the burning sensation).
However, unlike other botanical such as peppers, ginger only stimulates the nerve endings sensitive to heat and does not cause any type of chemical burn. Thus when the punishment was over and the ginger removed, the recipient of the punishment could return to work quickly.

said giggled

Right after telling writers to just write "said" you give an example that helps build character by using "giggled" instead of plainly using "said". Evidentally there are some times to skip using said.

Not enough do it!

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