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so good

Man can this guy write! This is what we look for stories to do for us. And the stab moment was strong, was understandable and disposable in his frame at the time. Ratcheted up a bunch of notches right there in that moment, and made it for the story to take it's course.

timeandtide

The one thing I like is watching my lady get fucked by two men at the same time. I just love watching her take dick.

while I comment late enough

that the order of authors is known, I do think that the "Bubbles" the clown character does let you know who was first... although I don't know if the other Bubbles story preceeded this one.

Anyway, I'll try to get through it... I think I was rude about the concept earlier.

Green-something

This might help

There. -. There it is. It's over there
Their. -. Their children all had flowers in their hair

Not bad story. Thanks.
m222rjr

Nice.

I don't write here, but I do write, and I like the conclusion. Reminds me of Terry Pratchett, and Neil Gaiman.
Overall it was a good time. Well done.

Not Bad

Not a bad story but not JPB. It was a valient attempt and I did enjoy it. Kudos to Bob for allowing this kind of thing. My

Another Great Story

I would never deign to assume I was ta!ented enough to write an ending to one of JPB's stories but I would enjoy reading the endings that were submitted if I could find them. thanks

Ha!

Best line, clown tastes funny

...

Rather like this one...

The part that I did not feel complete about? Yes, the stabbing - but that also made the relocation to SOTB necessary, and put the protagonist in limbo...

The female leads' run through the countryside - can't have been idyllic. What soul searing things happened there?

Yes, yes - I know... "people were so kind"... but self destructive impulses meeting poor/different country/culture ain't a good recipe.

Green - something

This was epic

Thank you for publishing this story! I really enjoyed the series!!

real life

I was diagnosed with MS seven years ago, at 60. The best sex of my life came afterwards.
Doctors keep telling me that MS is a terrible disease. The MRI tests show typical MS patters in my brain. Fortunately I don't have any symptoms - except perhaps a newly acquired taste for Literotica-:)

This is one of

the loveliest stories on Literotica. Should be a 10 star

Good grammar matters.

This is the first chain story I've read, but it would read a lot easier if you used quotation marks properly, or if you just used them at all. I say this because in my own writing for this site, what few readers I have seem to appreciate good grammar. Keep writing and good luck.

Sweet love story

I loved it! Well written. Read easily. Likable characters, even an almost cheating wife. A 5 Star Rating.

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