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I just have to say this, I hate the way this is ending! I don't mind some BDMS but I actually hate this. You are an excellent storyteller and I love most of your other works, but not this one. A good Dom/sub relationship is about trust and I don't condone violence for Any relationship. Keep writing!!

Why

Why did a hermit have two chairs
Why did he give her a beer
Why did he buy her lunch
Why did you not tell how she found him.
Empty

A great romance

I've read this story a few times and it never loses it's appeal. It's just a great shame that there isn't a continuation (at least that I've been able to find).

Phil

Interesting Story All The WAY!

When the other critics write fucktard, & bad story, etc. I can tell they have not lived. They have not experienced how twisted some peoples minds can be. I was in the military, stationed in the U.S., single, when I moved into this town next to another married couple, He had been stationed in Thailand for a year, came back with a falcon tatooed on his back, a Thai tree monkey, and an attitude. Man King, women slave. I personally witnessed him verbally abusing her. When she left him, he went for his gun, I intervened, he was arrested, they divorced. She later told me that he would bend her over the foot of the brass bed and anally rape her. So to those who berate these 2 stories, YOU HAVE NOT LIVED AND EXPERIENCED HUMAN DECADENCE! YOUR WORDS INDICATE THAT TOTALLY!!! I give 5***** because of the complexity of the stories, characters, cheating, and all the other human bullshit!

WHEN ONE HAS TO SING HIS OWN PRAISES

it doesn't bode well for the pair, TK U MLJ LV NV

I liked it 😊

Engrossing.

A Tale as few others I have read on this site. I find it very interesting how so many Authors can keep a Tale rolling on the same story line. Please keep up the good work.....all of you.
Mahalo

Good start.

Of a Tale I am sure I will enjoy since you, "RedHairedandFriendly", are involved in it. I look forward to reading this Tale.
Mahalo, Red.

Olé!

Loved this story - great colourful scene-setting, a lovely flow to the narrative,great sex, and a neatlydevised ending. Thank you for a very enjoyable read!

You are one fantastic writer!

Where are the Americans?

Your story is a very funny take on international relations but where, o where are the meddling Americans with their finger in every oarlock and up every bung hole with their declarations that if it ain't American, it ain't good?

Different

I see it progressively getting to b more and more. Sad

Bullshit

That is crap. There is so much wrong with this story. I would have bit the bitches clit off. Let her go to the hospital and explain that. And wife would be close to divorce. I know some of you would think that is wrong. But this was RAPE. To hell with them. This

awesome story, great to have help.

An interesting development.

I liked the gentler tone of this chapter.

Some feedback: several times you misspelled Afsoon's and Farisa's names, which I found distracting.

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