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one of the most dependable authors

Selena, you are the greatest inspiration to me. I hope one day my work will honor your pioneering efforts, redefining erotica for us all.

Superb

Aside from me teaching him where to put the knife a little more effectively (quite a bit lower but the S.O.B. would still survive), I wouldn't change a bit of this.

I understand how he could get so much done. I've been in the same mental state in my past. (I just wish I could capture that kind of energy now.)

Thanks for writing this. Please keep writing more of these thought provoking stories.

J

Anon, if you don't want to come across an unfinished story, I would suggest going to a book store and paying for your literature. Thankyou Ellie for fulfilling my imagination

Well I think there will NEVER be an end to this story

If I understand the author, this was written as a part of some weird challenge. I'm not sure why this chapter has to be quite so unfinished, but since this writer continues to post and has made no mention of continuing this, I feel this is all we will get. Which makes for a problem. Unfinished, as it sits, this was a very unsatisfying read and I'm not sure why any author would leave it like this. With FTDS no longer with us, someone else would have to take this thread up, ask the author's permission to finish (this author is still active and posts stories now and again) the story and then actually write a decent finish. Maybe someone like George Anderson might attempt such an ending. Highly unlikely that happens. So we're left with this mess. Not good. Not good at all.

This is one of my favorite stories,,,,

I love this story. First, the shock value (of her walking out). Second- the payback was swift, brutal and quite effective; not too many times you can get revenge and make a nice tidy profit from it!

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Ya what the hell is this about.

Wow!

Wow! This was the best ever Tx Tail Tales I mean the best...of course I use my iPhone to highlight and listen to these stories rather than read them
....lol 10 💫

Hooked!

You've got me hooked onto this. That suspense where Piplup suddenly uses Hydro Pump - I was surprised! Thought it was Level Five or something. By the way, Piplup doesn't really have a type advantage against Garchomp. While Water is super-effective against Ground, Dragon actually resists Water. It probably doesn't make much of a difference to most readers, but proper fans of the Pokemon games might throw a hue and cry. :)
Nice story though. Looking forward to reading the rest of it.

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