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Erotic, exotic and fun. I want the fun to continue....Thanks!

Great story

I loved this as a quick fix while waiting for your next novella! One small point I'd like to make. I'm not a big fan of the word genitals when describing an erotic love scene. Maybe it's just me, but I find it too clinical a term. I prefer pussy, labia, lips, mound or almost anything else. I'd still read your stories despite this, so please don't be offended by my comment. I just wanted to get it out there as a bit of friendly advice. I could be the only person who feels this way, and if that's the case then please disregard!
Once again, well done on another wonderful romance story, with just enough sex to make it even more enjoyable! Can't wait for your next story.

oh my!

Have grown to love (even more with each story) your writing, the skill and talent you have from start to finish is most overwhelming.

As many would agree, a happy ending is what we all hope for.
Yet the power of such a heart winching ending was not a lost.

Brilliant as always AVL!

Much love and thanks

I love how you let the characters' relationship develop realistically - I'm sure it's a personal preference but for myself I have trouble with stories that have people jump straight from meeting to full-blown relationships (probably because when I tried that in real life, they never went anywhere and the best have been slow and deeper).

Now the funny thing is, I could swear I just read Nancy's story in the last couple of days!

Please Finish

I am beginning to get the feeling that there might never be a part two and that you are just leaving us all on a cliffhanger. Though a cliffhanger preserves the quality of the writing, resolving the tension would make the story much more enjoyable to read. Please Please Please Please add an ending to this wonderful writing.

Thoroughly enjoyed this story even when I was choked up!

You told us a marvelous and powerful story. The sorrow and the joys seemed very real and were extremely moving. All the way to the end, you had me worried something would happen to destroy the happiness they were building. Excellent job!


Cool story! Laughed at the ending. Looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for sharing.


Thank you. I was afraid it wouldn't be up to par because I have been so busy lately.


Once you give a character a name. STAY with it. It is boring, and dehumanizs the character when you repeatedly refer to them as, "The older woman, or the beautiful teen." and all the other nouns you keep referring to them. Read a Good novel and see how a trained author holds the story line and keeps the characters real. It is a good story; just use the names you gave them, or get a lot more creative. Most of the writers on Literotica do what you do.

As a sufferer of Chronic Pain, due to damaged vertebra in the neck, I would sign up for this Treatment even with the possibilities of changing gender. As It would stop me enduring pain on daily basis, which can only get worse. Therefore I can fully understand Joe pushing for this. I notice that some have commented that the sex scene is from a masculine view point. This is hardly surprising, as Joe did not suffer from gender misalignment. So his initial approaches to lesbian sex would be male centric.
If there are more chapters to this story, which I hope there is. Then as his mind adapts to his new body and learns what it can do and how to properly please another woman. The question is as he becomes used to this new body, would she start to fancy men or would the mind stay orientated towards women. As this appears to be his first day in his rejuvenated body whilst conscious. The speed of the narrative is faster than it should be for a si/fi story. But for an erotic transformation about the right pace.

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