First Time Story Comments

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I can't imagine a book that good. Your story had me a little chubby maybe even more so if she did resist

another wife cheating and happy about it hope she gets served soon.....

Presume the custom of nurse always in the room during exam would make it awkward for flow of story...?

agree with 10 mo anon below-move it to non consent

wonder what her gf's are going to think /say when she feels them about HER first exam...?!?

Cheating bitch with no morality... Hope she gets it hard in here face

I would of given it a five but cheating is cheating it doesn't matter on which side it is

Darren

My mind, pussy, clit and nipples are loving this. Thankyou...!!!

I never expected to bump into writing as good as this.I cared about the main couple in this sweet storey with its strong moral message.The only point that slightly jarred for me was how they seemed to suddenly jump to her “being pounded doggy style.”I still rate you as a very fine...

Too bad her birth control pills don't fail, and she becomes a mommy! Sounds like he made a good account of himself...

This was exceptional.

This was a marvelous description of a guy’s first time - I’d say it was the best male POV I’ve read anywhere

Great story. Really full and detailed. The characters were so real.

5 stars are not enough - there need to be tens

Such an interesting piece!

Ah, nostalgia sex. Some of the best. The fact that Sophie was also created that night added even more sweetness to it. The way their love life proceeded makes me wonder why they didn’t have even more kids. Like Sophie, they would have been raised right.

Her dreams are over the top, in the way many erotic dreams tend to be. 24 inches made me wince :-)

Delightful. Very realistic. Thanks for sharing this.

Why do so many writers abandon their highest rated '01' stories after one episode and go back to trying new ideas?

You have more than talent; you have a gift. You titillate while teaching numerous virtues. Thank you. Our libraries that put perverse pornography into the children's section would do more for their communities if they dumped the trash and replaced it with copies of The Only Time Is...

Wow!

Interesting piece, but even more interesting are the comments. I assume that the absolute ones are American, but the characters are British, and even though marital fidelity is obviously an issue there too, there is a gulf in moral attitudes between Europe and the US that I suspect...

What a hot story. I want to hear more. Did you 2 meet up again? Did you become regular lovers? Did you love sucking and being fucked? Did Andy turn you into a gay cock slut?

More stories, with details please!

The problem she will never meet anyone because she's a homebody. She was a homebody when she left her parents house and she fell into the same trap. Here is the other problem he her as exclusive to him only and this is a problem with roommates, they become obsessive when sex is involved....

What happens if her belly swells?

Such a beautiful story and such a fantasy of mine. Definitely made me long for some close intimate personal time with another man.

What’s a stag? Sounds like just a cuck

@Catman1001 - first thing I ever wrote since college - my naive style shows, but it’s not a bad story 😊 Emily

lol - jeong is a 26 year old virgin by now. And Eric has crows feet around his eyes

One of the best stories I've come across in a long time. Probably the best One and Done stories. I'd be interested in seeing this adapted to a short series. Delve further into their insecurities. Play up how isolated they've felt. The rejections they've faced. Really give them an...

part 2?

Excuse the pun but her epic war and peace war posts, and war vehicle posts, and money and weapons given for the wars is pretty much it nowadays. Writing on her Facebook isn't even mentioned except for turning a story here into a book... so much for working on nothing but more Jeong....

Great story and very creative writing. I loved it and can't wait to read more of your work !!

Love watching wife sucking strangers cocks especially black ones. The contrast of white and black is amazing. Every wife should try a gloryhole once in their life.

Yes! As any guy who has tasted sisters. it is absolutely, salaciously, delicious. Usualy the second sister is be compared favorably over her sibling.

Not all that different from my own first experience. Except we were both virgins and I had no idea my cox was big. Because of that developed a desire to hurt girls just a bit because of my size. When with more experienced girls they craved being pounded.

Good premise.

But the sex simply couldn't have been any more automatic.

No description of making out?

No bra being worn, so why not some extensive breast involvement?

Once he'd played with them over her shirt there should have been some dialog about her breasts. How good they felt....

you just... look, the first story is often the most rough. but this is a babble of thoughts in a timeline format. lots of grammar stuff that could have used with a read over. perhaps go read some stories in the same vein and get sn idea for structuring and what you like, or don't...