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WHY?

Had a good story going then fucked it up with the Anal sex!

Maybe

for a quick jerk/jill off story, but wasn't any story to it, no background or build-up, where was the first time? was it a first titty fuck?
Still gave it three stars for a good try.
Next time background and build-up and make it longer.

lame!!!!!!!!!

A good story, clampealer.

Nice and sexy, and well worth the read -- thank you. I particularly appreciated your comment about the nonnies who never have anything positive to offer and just spew their bile over stories because it makes them feel big. Well said! Four stars from me -- I would have liked a bit longer a story to enjoy the outcome!

Nice, sweet story

It was a pleasure to read. Hope you continue it.

No matter how many times I read this story I feel it gets better and better love it

Amazing & Sexy!

A wonderful story that got me more and more turned on. Even though the story is one of the longest ones I have encountered on Literotica, I kept wanting to read more.

I also appreciate how you respected the character Penny. She was a bit naïve, but you didn't have her end up becoming a mindless slut like the characters of too many stories ended up becoming. Instead, she learned to be confident in her sexuality while continuing to be true to herself (i.e. a good student).

I am also see that you threw a little reality into the story. Her trip to the pharmacy, after her first romp, was no doubt to get a morning after pill and some long term birth control, because a good girl like her wouldn't have thought she needed protection before meeting her blond boyfriend.

Keep up the great work!

Very fucking hot!

And you did it without foot long penises and DDD babes! Wish more authors showed that kind of judgment.

NO WAY

ANOTHER STUPID ONE PAGE STORY THAT IS MISSING THE STORY. WHY DO YOU AND OTHER WOULD BE AUTHORS SUCKER READERS INTO READING YOUR STORIES TO FIND YOU COULDN'T WRITE ONLY A LIMITED STORY?

This is such a pathetic story

But about the other xommentary not all virgins have their hymen still intact

There is more to thier story that needs telling

I agree with the others here, this is really just a first chapter in the story.

What happens in college for Stef and Cole? And if they make it through that, what happens then?

I also wonder about where Mark and Michelle end up. Does she stop being such a slut and they make it or does she drive him away?

Fine writing and characters that make us want to know more about them. Let's hope you can find another 5 star story about these folks. Thanks.

suggestion

Hi
I am going to confess here something which really happened
we were 2000 miles apart and we were not virgin
and we fucked like rabbits
I remember each n every moment ..wish I could have ability to write
Your story made me so happy reminding those fantastic days n nights
thank you for sharing

Yup...to be continued. ..

Please continue this lovely story

Thanks!

I've read several of your stories. This is my favorite. Just re-read it for the second time. It was even better than the first!

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