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I'm glad you're liking it.

It gets weirder. lol. And thank you for bringing the typos/grammar to my attention. I rushed through the proof reading process in order to get as many episodes out as possible while I work on projects outside of this site. I'll try to be more careful in future chapters. As of now part five is the most recent of Within the Shadows released for submission. I ran through them again to check for typos, and found a couple that I've fixed. :) I'm really glad that you enjoyed the first part and I hope that you continue to enjoy where the story leads.

Intriguing

A very interesting start. It is fairly well written but there are some typos in the writing that take away from the story, like when Kyle says "we're fine people." Which should be "we're fine, people." Since he isn't trying to compliment the group lol. Looking forward to the next chapter.

WTF?????

Interesting but really weird. Hope chap 2 comes out soon.






JHJ

speed sex

Well, this is a bit different from the stories I usually read. But I must say it's different and interesting. Clever premise and nice story line, and of course well written. Write on!

Ted

Very well written.

I love a good ghost story, especially one as engaging and complex as this one.

Totally awesome

This is a really great story, I enjoyed every chapter. You're a good writer. Keep it up

A few typos here and there but well written and an amazing story!

I'm not one...

... who swears unnecessarily but, FUCK, that was a simply awesome story.
It had me gripped from start to finish, especially the last couple of pages with the "will she / wont she" die. Spectacular, thanks. 5*

Good story

You are really hitting your stride with these stories. Thanks.

loved your story

I can see why its an award winner. voted five stars

Wow!

This is one of the most amazing nonhuman stories I've read here, I hope there'll be a sequel!

Succubus

Basically an inhuman woman who feeds of the life force of men through the act of sex, its male counterpart is the Incubus. Glad you enjoyed the story.

Hands up!

Suprême work of fiction

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