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Great series

I can't wait for the fourth installment.

Thank You!

I love how you write AltheaRose. Your flowing syntax, believable characters , the highly erotic but restrained love scenes and sex scenes, it all works so well together.
Incidentally I think that "The Adventures of Gretchen" in graphic novel form would be a hoot to read!

Great job

I really liked the pacing here and how you kept it realistic. You are a good writer and I hope to read more.

A good start on explaining

It's hard to fully understand how people get to the point in their lives where they are so sexually open, but this is a well written description of how it started for you. I'm sure some readers will think it's too slow a build up, but it's really necessary to the big story.

ever so slightly weird

found this just a bit weird; that was likely the idea of course; but even so still liked it. there are a few gabe's around i reckon; certainly more than a few phil's with women i know. keep it up. will add you to my list to read others. K.

thank you

omg,,, hot story, as a masturbating sissy I had a woodie all the way thru.

Hi

I like the idea. I like the language. What I am missing in this intro (I assume that the story will continue) is their expectations and fears for this gathering. I would like less gate keepers and more info about the characters.

Thank you

Thank you to everyone who commented. I really appreciate comments, whether they are complimentary or (constructively) critical.

I will be taking a little break with this series while I work on some other stories and work out some more details in this series. Then I will return with the remaining chapters of the series in quick succession. Rest assured, there will be more. Thanks again!

Request....

more More MORE M O R E ! please....
Fabulous tale, please continue this one.

Great

Great story. My answers are a a c. Would love it to continue, enjoyed the flowering of Clare's sexuality

Lucky guy

Excellent story, well told. I'm very jealous. I not only wish my wife was built like yours, but that she would also expose herself like this, and more. I used to have fantasies of her wandering around topless, or even semi-nude, with her skirt largely see-through. You're a very lucky man.

No sex was promised, so nobody missed it.

But plenty of stripping and nudity. It would make a fine film by the way it is practically a screenplay.

Will you be writing a 3rd part of this?

more brit

Hi Zen, can you write some more brit episodes please?

Thank you!

I really appreciate the kind feedback! Rest assured, I will continue the story of Ishtar. Stay posted! :)

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