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WOW!

Expressing beyond WOW would be redundant. But making WOW triple-sized and quadrupling the size of the text still wouldn't express how hot this story is.
I'd be hard pressed (though you've certainly made me HARD by your writing) to write anything more erotic, sexy, appealing, interesting and unique.
I've already read other stories that you've written and find all of them of the same incredible erotic level.
It's too bad there isn't a "+" (plus) button on the scores - Five, no FIVE isn't a high enough score for this one.

Now Now!

I believe the authors have stepped on some prudish sensibilities! Nudity and certainly public sex are largely prohibited in the U.S., yet it happens when there is a will. I can't believe a nation of 1.4 billion doesn't skinny dip somewhere or contain adventurous kinky couples. Also notice they didn't invite the police or the communist party. Power to the People! Enjoy, and send us the pictures.

@ManosHands

Thanks a lot for the offer, I'll surely let you know if I need any help with editing.
I'm glad you liked the story, I started writing few days back and this is my first writing experience so it means a lot for me. I'm learning from whatever I read and trying to improve.

Editing...

Great story...different but I liked it.
If you'd like, I'd be more than happy to work with you on the editing of future stories.

You nearly scored.

If you had tried just a little harder I’m sure Joanna would have taken her bikini off, which would have made a much more interesting story! Perhaps next time?

Land of the long white...

You're now on my favourites list. I was a lucky Aussie once in Auckland. You may have inspired me to write that up...

Unbelievable

Yes! Yes! Yes!

I must confess that this story, or rather her narration of her activities, drove me wildly, slowly insane. For some unknown reason my robe fell open. Can you believe it? It fell open! Well, then I had to . . .

Ticklishsoles

Great story

The second of yours I've read after Brave New World. I love the way you tease the setup for future chapters. Looking forward to more.

Fun read.

i like the idea and it was a turn on, please do more with this.

What a tease!

After an edging session of two hours my cock just exploded thanks to your story! I love this kind of tease and I'll wait for other stories like this. Good work and keep writing!

Editing

@ all

I have edited this story with the help of some feedback I received from readers. I have submitted the edited version, it will be published after 48 hours.

wow

Great sex, fabulous ending. Loved it.

More!

We love this episode! There is no rush like having sex in public, except when you know you have a audience. Can't wait for Gwen and Tim to try it......very public.

I am speachless... your amazing story just kept taking me higher and higher. Well thought out plot and a story I won’t ever forget. Thank you!!! 😘

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