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WOULD LOVE TO HAVE YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY. THANKS FOR WRITING.

Exhibitionist Male

I sort of liked it, in spite of it being unreal. No teacher back then would have done that. The idea was sort of fun to imagine being in, but it just wouldn't happen.

Now, if it had been, say, a walk in the woods where they caught the boys playing around with dares and such "walk to the road and stand there naked for 5 minutes" or something like that. I went to the "Y" to get swimming lessons, but the "coach", looking back, seemed to enjoy watching just a bit too much.

Oh well, I liked the story and sort of wished I could have been there too.
Thanks for writing.

Beautiful

It's hard for a bathroom sex story to make me sad, but somehow this one just hits all the right memories.

I have this same fantasy

You did such a great job getting your readers to feel that mixed emotions of lust vs worry that is all so very real when having this kind of fantasy; which I do, but haven’t had the right opportunity to see it come true yet.

Breezy read

Sweet story, nice movement.

" the tank's thin fabric kept the analytical faculties of his brain disabled. "

I have heard of this issue.

Keep writing...

Once you start...

...it just gets easier and easier to show more and more and do more in each session. It is so hot.

Terrific!

More, please. Your writing is really wonderful.

Story sequence

Great story as well as also LSG. There was some redundancy between the two stories. Over all very hot.

I'd like to know the chronological order of your stories. It would help in reading them.

Please edit. These errors are distracting:

1 2nd paragraph 2nd word at - delete it;
2 21st paragraph 1st word should be An not And;
3 22nd paragraph 1st sentence, last word past tense reached not present reach;
4 25th paragraph meet should be met;
5 29th paragraph visible should be visibly;
6 40th paragraph incomplete sentence;

This is where i bogged down. I like your story, but i don't think you reread it, nor had someone else proof read it. This is like getting ready to have sex and getting a phone call from your kid in college. Do you pick up or send it to vm and either way the mood is changed for the worse.

Others love it, so it may just be me.

Good luck!

State Street was where all the action was...

or not! Seems like the Union was the place to be on Halloween.

Good luck in the contest.

A very well-crafted, subversive, erotic story. I enjoyed it as a satire about company team-building exercises, which in my experience have been a lot of nonsense. The pace was great and in the middle and later part of the story I really wanted to be on that beanbag chair. One of the best endings of any Literotica story. Clever and just right.

Not bad

For a rookie, keep tapping that key board you talk about...

wow x

WOW X soooooooooo good x so wanted this to hppen to me and my G/F xxx so easy to read more more more please

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