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Not Bad

The title feels a bit misleading. Not at all what I expected, but good nonetheless. I think this would do well as chapters. 4 stars.

Quite the tall tale.

I just can't get the mirrors out of my mind, fairly obvious considering the decor of the rooms. You didn't mention your favorite room, or how to warm up brass dongs. I thought the cousin to be the most interesting, perhaps there young age and discovery. Good place to end the voyeyring and taping (filming). Crazy as this story is I finished this same day.
Thanks

Wow

Very nice submission! Well-paced, with some great writing paired with it. Some small editing mistakes.. I'd be willing to edit for you in the future.

I find it interesting that you set up a backdrop, an actual year and time. That alone really brought the story to life. Hoping to see more from you later.

4 stars

Different

You had a very interesting vision on this story, as it could've gone many different ways. Good writing, but was hoping for a 3-4 pager, even though this was nice. Thanks for your submission! 4 stars!

Great Again

Another great chapter. I look forward to every thing you write. Thanks for your time and your talents.

needs work

I like the premise of your story but found the execution of the writing to be distracting as well as the general incredulity of the plot. I wish there was a more fleshed out conclusion as well as perhaps some possessiveness displayed by her husband, I.e. him being very handsy with her. Also I would suggest adding some visual description of the characters probably through comparison. I.e. I could see why she wanted to be more covered up and not remind her bf that her breasts looked like a child's compared to mine, if I let her borrow my suit the bottoms would fall right off of her slender hips.

decadent and very erotic

ireally enjoyed this first chapter. i found it very arousing very erotic and dare i say even pornographic, i loved it .the idea of finding a lady who is willing to verbalise these erotic and stimulating topics has been a long time fantasy -- fetish of mine.
more please . tantalise me

This was as good as the first part except where for one paragraph where you changed his name from Matthew to Gary for one sentence.

manko

Yumi discovered her manko. I have a feeling she is going to be discovering a lot more in the very near future.

Hey Slampa

Hey Slampa, I'd love to hear your thoughts on part 7? Do you have any suggestions/critique? I'm working on part 8 now, it's back in art class, but with some severe changes

Nothing at the door

I rarely do this but don't quit your day job. Readers Digest would be more fitting for this lame train wreck story. Yawn!! The keyboard that bored. Pure "soft-on" material.

BECOME A CUCKOLD SON

Get down and cleanup mom and love it. YUM YUM YUM

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