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It's one thing to be submissive. But it's quite a different thing all together give oneself sexually to another person, particularly when you are married and the other person is NOT your spouse!!

Submissiveness does NOT mean being submissive to any and everyone, without self-control.

That is the extreme fallacy in this series as well as others published here. A submissive always chooses who to submit to -- this is not a mindless inability to resist, as if hypnotised or brainwashed or mind-controlled, anyone who tries to exercise control. That is utter bullshit, and I call this author and others on it!

The wife's voluntary (not involuntary) choice to submit to this cocksucking asshole James is a voluntary surrender to extramarital sex - it is deliberate, wilful cheating, it is egregiously intentional adultery. It does NOT include the husband or his desires or his cooperation - he is out of the loop, sitting with his thumb up his ass and James' cock in his mouth, ready to watch his gutter cunt whore wife get fucked by the asshole.

And she has already started to lie to her husband, to deceive him, yo manipulate him as well. Clearly cocksucker James has been texting her sexually and convincing her to submit to him and cheat on her husband, and she has responded both to the texts and the intentions and suggestions, without telling her husband.

If she had any self-respect, any decency, any love for her husband and desire to keep her marriage, she would have refused ALL the texts from asshole James and call-blocked him the day after she first exposed her slutty cunt to him. She should have adamantly refused to ever see him again or tolerate his presence anytime into the future.

The gutless, no balls, chicken-shit coward of a husband is too meek, too faggoty to raise his voice and put a stop to this userous affair. Or simply stop the asshole's heart with 320 grains of shaped lead.

Not as good as the first two

This story is really unfocused. You also missed a really big opportunity with the photo shoots. You could have had Shia and Monica do a pictorial together.

"You mean this wordy douche has MORE to say?" AUTHOR'S NOTES!

Hello, hello! So, short and sweet, this all started with wanting to do a take on a typical porn trope: the girl off the street who gets talked into porn out of a desire for money or fame. I came up with a simple inversion: What if the photographer's legit, but the girl off the street is horny? From that, I added in a not-necessarily-healthy dose of self-awareness over the line being walked here, and that ended up informing Levi's hefty sense of rich white guilt. You know what kind of partner plays well off that? A not-as-rich person of color. I went with an Indian-American because that was the most interesting to me; a progressive-minded person from a culture that has some traditionally conservative views towards pornography (fun fact, I wanted to make a Savita Bhabhi reference somewhere but I couldn't find a good spot for it).

That's really all there was to it. This is definitely one of my more playful stories, and regardless of how this does with the ratings, I feel like there are a few things I could've done better but lacked the patience to really get right. I think you can argue that the leads lack consistency, though it's more of a vague feeling on my part than knowing exactly what's wrong, and I also wonder if the photography and sex scenes are too repetitive. But it was originally a lot worse: I originally submitted this on the 15th and pulled it from the queue the next day. After sleeping on it, I realized there were a few things I had to beef up. Devika quitting Umbrla was originally a much more skeletal scene than it is even now, for instance; it was just dialogue with a little bit of prose thrown in, and it was lazy as shit. But the big thing I added was the segment of the last shoot where Levi goes down on Devika. That was originally a brief allusion in the prose (like the doggystyle sex and the shower fingerblast/titfuck) that I expanded when I realized that sex scene *needed* to end on Devika's orgasm; that was the whole damn point of Devika's journey, and I'm glad I had the presence of mind to add it before it was too late.

As for influences: I spoke highly of "Exposure Compensation Factor" before and it's worth checking out if you haven't. In addition, one of my fans first contacted me by asking if I was into GeorgeDaBuilder's "Everybody Needs a Hobby," which I found to be a fun little harem story and also worth looking into if you like that kind of thing. Me, well, at a certain point you just keep typing because that's your brand, and I think I've about hit that point. Thanks for reading!

Fabulous job! The build-up, hot sex, details, follow through.. everything! 😍

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very hot till shoving the bikini up her ass thought that was dumb

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So hot!

Incredibly hot. I suspect the technology may be but dated, but this story stands the test of time!

Wonderful!

Very well written, with a nice build to the climax (literally). Looking forward to reading more.

Very promising

Your writing is coming along nicely and the characters forming over time. Real nice. I loved the dynamics played out in this one and Riley's final humiliation. Keep writing please!

That was...

Fucking amazing.
I'm not normally a fan of more exhibitionist stories but this is one of my favourite stories on the site.
Would comment more but I'm going to re-read the first part.

cant wait

I cant wait to read it. Also, try sending me an email. I'd love to communicate with you. i have received 2 messages so far without a reply email address, but its probably not from you. Next time you message me, please include an email address to reply (if it is you who has been trying to reach me).

Also, Hows the story coming along?

That was hot

Was that a real story? I came three times

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