NonHuman Comments

Load newRequesting new commentsRequesting new commentsNo new comments, try later

Latest 15 Reader Comments

INTRIGUING

And very exciting. Please tell me the continuation is close. Good Job, Loved it.C

Oh my goodness!!!

Billy baby you better get gone fast. Loving the twins although brother needs the confidence/knowledge like his sister. She is no joke and I love her to death. Waiting to see where this goes and what fun they will have. Little momma in the woods, where did she come from and how was she there without them knowing? Update soon please. The name is Lea or call me Gen. Love ya, peace.

Oh my!!!!

Just started reading this and damn it is good....I read more you write more. Ok? Ok, cool.

Good

Good, but maybe slow it down a little and give the characters some respite and time to consolidate, at least a chapter. Other than that, I like what you're doing.

hey?

Hey what about BJ's other children

amazing

Once again you wrote an amazing story I wish it could go on forever but unfortunately all good things must come to an end please keep writing. I also have a question would you ever write a story with same sex couples?

WONDERFUL

YOU HELD ME WIDE OPEN UNTIL THE VERY END. WAY TO GO. NOW I'LL READ YOU OTHER STOREY . I'M HAPPY, HAPPY AND A LITTLE TWISTED..

Love this new story and love Mac...very sexy new vamp for us. My thing is, the way it was described, these vamps were miles away from the kids and their families, but would sent the kids if they left the compound and released their scent for a few seconds....so how would they miss it in the same house for a min. or two or three?? Drunk or not, that is a knock at their greatness as protectors. I think they should be doing laps the next day! lol esp. those ones that kept control and didn't drink...jeez, they have less of an excuse!
Aside from that, the scene with Lily was absolutely wonderful. it was sweet and funny in turns. I loved how her wolf is mad with her. I'm picturing her getting a sermon from her wolf the next day on the perils of drinking too much. The way he gave blood to her was sweet and somehow more intimate and sexy than some of the real sexed up bites we've read about. Great stuff!

WOW

WHAT A GREAT IMAGINATION. I'M SO FRIGGIN EXCITED, I WILL FANTASIZE ALL NIGHT LONG, THANKS, I;VE GOT TO GET BACK TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Pleeease!

Please oh please oh please don't go away again! I'll be dead and buried before you're finished at the rate of one chapter every 5yrs. Seriously though you are one of my favorite authors here and I need more of your delicious writing.

Loved it

Maybe she could have gotten into a bit more trouble and received some really erotic punishment. Just to juice things up some what. All in all, Great Job.

Is part of this missing?

beautiful ending. i loved how the statue mirrored that moment that she met his wolf. The ending was perfect with them having a little girl. I wonder where the name came from. I love her sticking up for the girls too. Though she could have done it a bit more nicely probably. Nice to see them at the retreat at the end where they came together and saved each other's lives.

more

you did amazing. please make this a series

Sketchy

Sketchy sketchy! But giving it a chance and waiting to read more

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel