NonHuman Story Comments

I honestly couldn’t give 5 stars to this chapter, even as good as it is. The glossing over of the war and how it was presented left me a bit baffled. At the end of the last chapter, the identity of the weres had been wiped. Or so we were led to believe. Then we jumped right to a were...

As a retired Navy veteran, thank you for giving the USS Arizona, and her crew, another heroic adventure.

Nice story we need a second part to it

What no cliffhanger? I can hear the screams of your more impressionable fans, having been conditioned to expect one, screaming "Cliff me, smut-mommy, cliff meeee!"

Oh, those poor souls.

If ships got death certificates, I am sure "Cause of death: Kraken creampie", would be...

Thankyou for bring the Arizona into the tale. A fitting addition to this tale. Great almost ending to an amazing story. 5 stars for everything you do for us.

A great chapter. Au revoir Francois

Maw to Maw between a dragon and a kraken.

This was wonderful, again your talent for storytelling is amazing. And such anfuck yeah moment with the uss Arizona.

Once more a well written chapter of a wondrous saga.

The inclusion of the Arizona reminded me of a man I worked with so many years ago. He went by his nickname "Red", gotten back to those last days when he personally fought fires on the ships after the attack at Pearl Harbor. All...

Greatly enjoyed this chapter. The uss arizona part gave me goosebumps inspite of me not being an American lol. However I couldn't understand why Francois' power won't go to someone else. If you could include an explainer in the next part, it would be very helpful

DA-AMN!!! What an end to Frankie le Douche, and a spit in the eye of Poseidon, and the Great Game. I thought that Beth was going to do like Elizabeth Swan and become a Pirate Queen. (I was still trying to reconcile that with her affection for her land-locked boytoys.) Your solution...

"Boom-boom, bony fucks." Lmfao. 'Nuff said.

Cute story! Maybe breeding follow up chapter? 👀

He probably camped there every full moon after that night hoping she'd come back. He'd probably get a kick out of knowing he was a furry daddy. lol

There was quite a bit of snorts of amusement and a few wow's, after this chapter I am ready for some cleaning up and rebuilding. Some proper after battle reports and just kinda boring stuff.

Mike and the gang has earned a long rest..

I'm pretty late for Valentine's, however I also rather enjoyed your rendition!!!

👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

Another incredible adventure is winding down. But, what a fantastic journey all your readers have enjoyed so far. I can see the elements of the next instalment sprinkled throughout the tale and really look forward to the future of HFHM.

Wow. Great historical link in and a wonderful way to draw towards the wrap up. Thank you again for sharing this fantastic series (and all the spin-offs) with us.

Bitch! You gave me chills, too!

I took the time to read more about the USS Arizona, and especially about Lou Conter. The man was a true hero, perhaps imbued with a bit of Mike Radley magic. An unexpected, and quite touching, tribute to the crew of the ship.

I don’t seem to be doing well picking up on things....

This is my favorite so far. I want more!!!!

Now we are venturing into alternate Evolutionary Biology.

That was amazing

Ah, yes. Second time reading this story. I first read it about the time you published it and I enjoyed it because of the increasing scope of ‘stranger things’ taking place. And because of the way you describe them, these happenings don’t come across as anything like quaint or impossible....

Corey. Is that a reference to 'Twa Corbies'? Please continue!!!!!

I like this story.

May I mention a minor editing point, Torie? You often use the word 'sense' when you mean 'since'. You could do a simple, manual find and replace of the word sense with since in each chapter. I can't offhand recall if you use sense to mean sense -- as in sensing...

I don’t normally read this sort of genre it was different but I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Congratulations on your 150th story.

So, so. good! I love this. Super hung dominant aggressive futa/trans orc ravages elven pixie cockslut! That's just the best thing ever!

This is my third time reading this story and I am desperate for a part two. Please

I assume you already know you're a great writer. I love this story, what's already been said about doesn't need to be improved upon. I couldn't do that anyway. I just wanted to say I really enjoyed it, and echo the others praise and their desire for more.

This wolf-girl might be...

A bit confusing with another Jasmine in the first chapter while declaring the Jasmine we know to be dead. I did wonder if the last child would return at a future story point having survived and it appears so. Wonder how early she shifted and has stayed a wild cat? Probably when...

I absolutely love your work. I've saved this to my favorites and have read it many times. I never tire of it. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us.

Thank you Annabelle! Another great chapter! My favorite story.

You're an incredibly talented writer. This is the first werewolf story I've read where absolutely everything about it is original and believable! I'm completely immersed in the life of this pack and the drama and mystery is exceptional. Thank you.