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Amazing mind and skillful imagination, Thank you alone is too small. You MUST do post move-in of Jasmine and Tori with Annabelle.


Awesome Story

I've been wondering why you have not done much with the Journalist. Now I know.

Keep up the good work.

Great job

Wow. Great job. Let's tally, shall we? One negative comment out of ten, minus one guy who does not like lesbians. One negative comment out of almost 47,000 reads. A 4.60 rating. Calls for haste on the next chapter. Hmm. Enough said. Five stars. And do hurry. Oh and I read somewhere the more comments about a story, the more its sequel gets pushed to the front of the line. Two suggestions, both with multiple comments, multiple requests in those comments for the next chapter, hundreds of favorites, hundreds of thousands of reads, great ratings, and one even won some aware. So how about more of Kinky Tales, and a forgotten oldie but goodie, Like Mother Like Daughter? Add my voice to the many asking for more of these two. And did I mention five stars? Humor indeed. That comment was humorous.

Just terrible

It's posted in the wrong category. It should be in Humor and Satire. I haven't laughed at something this bad in a long, long time.

Too damn funny!

And bad too boot! She's dressed like a jersey cow! Still laughing at how bad this was.

Holy Devil

Nice combination of holy - devil. 'was continuously aroused with the conflicts explained in the story. Lilly's part of affirming her daughter in the act is very nice.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this chapter that presented Shannon and Mark's side of the story. You connected it into the original story very masterfully. Without going back to re-read the original I was aware where everything fitted in - now I must go back and re-read all the earlier chapters again.
Thank you for taking your time and getting it right. Worth the wait.


The Best Writer

I always love your stories! Virgin lesbian taking, now that's super sexy! The illustrations are fabulous.
Your fan, Liz


Absolutely loved the entire love story, and the 'posing' sessions as a majority part of the story was brilliant. Thanks for the fun and stimulating read. Will definitely now pull up More of Your writings.


You have outdone yourself with this piece; there were times when my stomach clenched with emotion - as when Annabelle walked away with another woman - J's sense of disappointment was palpable; you truly conveyed both Jasmine's lust for Annabelle and the pent-up desire. The sex was amazing - you just capture the scenes so well. Illustrations are great. Thank you so much.

Tied in very well with the corresponding stories! A great read.

Photos and why it is only 3*

Yes I liked the story very much, tied up the original story completely and but for the missing images would have earned 4 possibly 5*.

I do find the difference in American and English colloquial grammar rather hard to stomach at times though I suspect it's rather a matter of a generation gap, which is hardly your problem! But a little gentle editing to take account of some of the differences, before submission, might be worth the effort?

Your offer to email the missing images is generous and will be taken up - thank you.

Very erotic and exciting bondage and near naked display of beautiful slaves. Can't wait to read and view the next installment.


What's the FDEA? The DEA is the Drug Enforcement Administration.

holy pussy juice

I am in my early 4FB0 and all my life was with men's only but your story make me curious about lesbian love and I am secretly admiring women now a days and my maid give me look that says I know you are submissive pet and she just told me about massage and I am asked to lay on floor at 11 while kids at school and husband at office oh my god I am wet like a river

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