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Glad

that Tom and Ruth are getting married( I was hoping for this ending). Maybe he finally got his head out of his ass in regards to Ruth. Don't trust he won't suddenly have an itch Ruth can't scratch. Hopefully Alex never rears her ugly head again (or anyone else). There you go with your magic wand again Alex (waves wand) and ta da switch Alex. Can't see where that came form just because someone struggles with obedience does not automatically make them a switch. Some just shouldn't be into the lifestyle. Like Alex(cough slut cough). And I'm not even going into all the problems I had with the "kidnapping" scene. Not the story I thought it was going to be but gad it ended mostly the way I hoped for.

Ahhhhh! Public Displays of Domination! 💋 *prepare for emogis*

Sweet! Aw, engagements... *swoon*
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Hot-ass, public displays of domination left and right! *PDD makes me bashful*
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Yummy Ethan kicking Marisol's boney ass out the door *Cackle. Marisol is 💩.*
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Spankings! PUBLIC SPANKINGS AND WHIPPINGS! *Heavenly Ah music*
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Bathroom/counter sex with a belting!
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Here is to hoping for a Kalen-Maggie-James-Thalia freaky fun fest and being pleasantly, deliciously, hot spankingly, underground-sex-club-ing-ly disappointed.
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Meany. When's it going to happen???
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🍮 Here, have some bribe flan and tell me. Tell meeeee...
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Delighted to see this chapter and looking forward to the next. You do a great job showing the negotiation of the power exchange. And in Tess you've created an interesting, believable domme. Nice writing.

Thank you!

Just... Thank you for giving a voice and ear of understanding. It's nice to know you aren't alone.

way to go, Melissa

Mmmmmm. Very nice :) ... Melissa knew just when to go in for the kill, huh? Thanks, goamz, good stuff!

good story

nice, but I every time I read stories where a husband calls his wife mistress, it feels strained. I know people dig the lifestyle scenery, but...

anyway five stars. Thx.

The box and shoes

You have a great "hook" in the box knowing them and giving commands. I love that anxiety. This is so hot. I am coming to the party a little late. I just found it. I hope you make them do something that torments their feet. Like putting beer bottle caps in their shoes and made to stand or walk on them. At least mention that they have to take off their shoes whenever they have to strip or otherwise get naked. I am certainly looking for more.

I don't believe a "comfort zone" has anything to do with it.

I DO believe that the story has run it's course quite awhile ago and that people are simply tired of the ramblings. A good editor maybe? But this story simply lost my interest.

I wonder if you're gonna add some part of Marcus in your story. Somehow I wanna know what happen to him.lol and omg. Can you please put up a picture of James and Thalia may be? Like the way you describe them in your story, any actress or actor? I can't think of any and I always think how sexy James is and how beautiful Thalia is and bet she had an innocent face. Gah! Can't wait for the next chapter! You are amazing. I love how you describe Crucible in very detail info that I could picture it perfectly, its one thing that I can never do when it comes to writing. I admire you and your work.

Long overdue ...

... but I just wanted to drop you a line, and say how much I loved this installment! You've got flow and convincing dialogue, which isn't easy to do! Well done my dear! And I'm with STG, stories about youth are usually cringe worthy, but you nailed it. =D An easy five stars from me, darling!

Now, where the hell is chapter 3??

Just found this little gem of a series. It is wonderfully written, and novel- a sensual, gentle power creating a different kind of domme. Such a pleasure to read and imagine. Soft, compassionate domination that soothes and seduces submission. Good for Ellen, in carving her own path of dominance, and for giving Silence the ability to truly submit by choice. This was simply amazing. And good for you, for writing your own vision instead of following the prevalent trend towards domination by severity.

Well done!

Enjoying this story - from both points of view - very much indeed.
Hope that there will be more installments.

@anonymous

It puts a smile on my face to read your comment. I know I've pushed hard in this story, probably forcing people out of their comfort zone. I admit that I have a tendency to be quite severe in quite a few of the scenes that I've written, but while writing and going over the scenes I always kept what the girl(s) were getting from it in mind and each time they got at least as much out of it as Tom did. In retrospect I would probably opt to replace some scenes with scenes that are more familiar to people in the scene and that would lead to similar results for the girls.

An important thing I tried to keep in mind is that there had to be a difference between what he did with Ruth and with Alex, otherwise there would be no grounds for Tom's defence as to why he did stuff with Alex. Most of all, I wanted to use Tom to explore facets of what it meant to be a Dom. Being domineering, planning, nurturing, caring. Some comments have described him as selfish and arrogant. Granted he is both, he gets his share of the fun every time and he has a fair amount of arrogance. What I didn't show, in favor of including more sexual scenes, is how he plans and thinks about each scene and also how he keeps taking care of Ruth. There's only so much space in a book.

But most of all, thank you for recognizing Alex as a character. Some have written her off as a slut that ruined the story, thereby trashing her worth as a character. She was not easy to write, nor was it easy to reconcile her with Ruth (which was my goal with this story).

I like each character I've written in this story and from my point of view they have gained thigns of value in the year that the sotry spans.

C&D

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