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Hot!

More humiliation than I'm into but hot fantasy since he asked for it and they discussed it. I was really hoping she had locked him in a cage after icing him down and made to lick her clean!! Please finish this hot read! Thanks for sharing

Very hot!

5 stars for hot and original! I'd like to hear more. I love that he was forced to wear a cock cage hehe so naughty! I hope we hear how long and what humiliating tasks he must perform. Maybe a class back at the gym while wearing it under women's yoga pants, butt plug and all?? Thanks for the great read

Perfect!

Your story is fantasy. Please do not let the previous comments affect your amazing imagination and future writing. People need to understand that and if they don't they shouldn't be on this site!
I love the dynamic and the idea that her mother sold her. Very hot. Please keep your stories coming!

awwww!

You really had me going at the end there! I felt that what happened before was foreshadowing for her getting pregnant but was still taken aback by the whole "daddy" kink (not my thing at all) and was not expecting it at all! Loved it ^_^ I also enjoyed all of the relationship building in this chapter between them and her family and his old friends. I really enjoy when you have a good balance of that and the sex as you did this time. Hope we don't have to wait too long for the next installment as she just dropped such a bomb. Also I am intrigued to see an author tackle D/s while the sub is pregnant!!! Currently being a pregnant sub I know how the changes your body and hormones (emotions) go through can make play or punishment difficult. Plus the trepidations I've seen my Dom go through wanting to be careful which I'm sure will be huge for Dan. He has wanted this for so long plus he has so much guilt and baggage. I am totally intrigued to see where this goes next.

Not good. In real life...

This woman should get out of this relationship as fast as she can while she still can, before this evil, cruel, cold blooded psycho puts her in hospital.... or worse.

Excellent!

Excellent. I am looking forward to reading more of this story and any others you might have in mind.

I am NOT a nitpicker, but I did notice one typo while reading: no vs know. So this is meant as just a friendly FYI:
"It says Winston, which will inform everyone that that is your safe word. If you say it, they will no to stop immediately."

Great Story

Please put out another chapter.

I need a woman like her.

A waste of my time to read this scene. Not erotic

Perfect, perhaps.

I agree a nice flow to your story. I wonder how manymore authors like yourself await me here, on Literotica, a wonderful find.
Like the writer editor story, any of this from personal
experience s ? Please lie if needed.
Like yourself, I was raised Chatholic, a large religious organization. A good upbringing of discipline, but how true is someone else's interpitation of how we should live. Still a Christian, l like the new direction the church is headed. Our small parrish has no young family's attending.
Thanks for a wonderful story and story line.

short

But not too short. Very exciting. I'm glad there will be more from your hand.

so glad

so glad to see you back I just love this story please more soon

Drivel

I understand why it has so few views and no favorites.

Could anyone be that dumb?

Was Marsha really that stupid? Just horrible.

What she really did?

Was go straight to the hospital and had the abuse documented. Then she got a lawyer and sued him. She got millions and retired happily to a tropical island. You don't really think she would stay with a man that committed assault and battery on her person do you? UGH!

Post this crap in gay male

So no one needs to read it, Just horrible.

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