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Love it!!!

I am so in love with this story. I enjoy everything about it. I love James and Thalia together. It sucks that we have to say good bye to purgatory. Hopefully characters from there will show up in later chapters. I'm so glad Ethan finally got rid of that botch marisol. I thought he was never gonna leave her. The sex scenes are always super hot. I wonder when Marcus will show up again in the story. Something tells me he is not willing to let it be over. I look forward to your next chapter. Hopefully I won't have to wait for too long.

road side story

Reminds me of the Story of O in its tone. The only thing is my slut's ass is mine alone.

nods

i can understand the way she feels,,sometimes one gets so tired of being good, needing to lose control, having limits pushes and tested,,some things are painful
thank You for sharing and taking the time to show a darker side
suzanne

cute

But I agree where is the rest?

Sad and repulsive

The endless parade holds no power to arouse. Like watching a meth head 'self medicate.'

And you thought this made for a good story?

Not a single erotic, clever or entertaining part to it. Just an ugly tale. Why you think anyone would want to read this is simply beyond me.

Is stupidity a reality?

Because they characters all seemed to be complete idiots. Even for fiction, this was just bad.

A true literary piece!

Your story drew me in at the onset. I couldn't wait to read the next chapter. I then realized it was a three part story that continued expertly written, applying my own thoughts what might occur. You wove it together beautifully, which I'm sure was difficult from time to time based on the depth of this story. I'm truly waiting for your next series!

Seems like the end is near... Too near! :)

"Welcome to parenthood. It's really not that different than being a dom, just all the subs are the bratty kind."
FA_JF, you made me laugh out loud, so true, so true! :)

Nicely done, JaH, I sincerely hope they stay together! This is what a relationship is all about, normal stuff, unpredictable problems and dealing with them, talking about them, talking about feelings, wants, needs.
The vicks idea and the toothbrush AND the saran wrap! Nice! Bound to make a woman crazy...
Can't wait to read the last chapter. Good job!

It is very good writing.

As the previous reviewer said, it is also morbid. However, I am enjoying your journey to the dark side. Keep it up.

Chapter 5?

Wasn't there a Chapter 5 to this story, or am I wrong? Please write more!

Chapter 2 please???

Love it waiting for next chapter. I like the story line too!

Parawa,
Your writing demonstrates all the best of restraint, in all of its meanings. You caress us with the subtlety of descriptions and characterizations. With no intent to do so, you shame those who grab us readers by the throat and hold our heads below the surface of their excess.

Bravo(a)

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