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Loved the detail

To paint a picture in a readers mind descriptions and details are so important and I think you did it beautifully.
I could see the journey in the maids cart vividly and was a far more erotic read because of those images.
Well done once again!

Loved it

Really well written and I'm intrigued as to what happens next.
I love a sub with Her own mind!!
5 stars.

SHIT

This was just abusive garbage. I don't usually make any negative comments but this story rubbed me wrong. Where is his love and caring for his sub? He tied and caged her and left?!!!! Totally offensive.

Ha

Just as well I can put in a counter comment to nonny. As I wonder if he read the same story as me?
Very descriptive, and gloriously humiliating. I shall have to buy myself a maids cart :-)

Per your directions, I have thought before speaking to you. It was well written and I didn't like a single bit of it.

Lacks detail

Not enough detail or explaination. Also, a very abrupt ending. Not very good.

one of the best that ive read, more please

Very interesting tale

You write her fear and anxiety well, and I loved her besting him.
Be interesting to see where you take this

Love it!

I'm so excited you decided to continue this story. I remember reading it last year amd really loving it a lot so I decided to go back and check if you had put up another chapter, and you have! I am really, really happy, you don't even know.
I hope that in the upcoming chapter(s?) you'll explain a little about the time this takes place in (and maybe what kind of society this is?). I really want to know now as some things point to the past wheras others make me think the story takes place in present time.
Also, I wonder if there's any sex involved in their relationship (sometimes I think not and then I think there is) and their age and appearence. Although I have accepted that their appearence is something that's left up to the reader's imagination.
So yeah I'm the kind of reader who would like everything explained rather than having some things left to my own imagination.
Anyway, I love the story and I hope you'll continue soon. That said, I prefer the shorter more frequent updates over the longer ones that take longer.

Well written

But face slapping is a hard limit for me.
I consider it abuse though I know others disagree

Editing

If this continues, you need an editor. Good meat, but the bones need work.

Yes, please...Sir!

Love this series as much as the others! Please keep writing! I can't wait for the rest of this one as well as Annie's story!

Response. To ladylarts

Her current job gives her a lot of flexibility when it comes to vacation. Also i am the male in the story and she's from where I live so her parents are here also. Hope that clarifies things for you.

Ooh My..

I truly love this book. I can't wait, no i will wait for it to continue

interesting

Not real big on the blatant public sex for everyone to see but it definitely makes me wonder how different my life would have turned out had I been given a girl on my 18th birthday instead of being almost 29 and still never having had a girlfriend or sex.

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