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I know...... I was just thinking the same thing. Very well written and love the story idea sooooo much.

Smoking hot!

I loved it. Kitten play is totally a thing for me, and this was lovely - all the negotiation took place in a way that was totally hot, and the sexy bits were very, very sexy.

...And now, I'm off to read your other stories. :)

Nice

This one i like. Good story line to the point but i do not feel short changed

Please proofread

Quality in a story depends a lot in word choice and good editing. This was a good start, but really could use am editor to polish.

This one hits all the buttons. I have such a thing for bottom hole spankings sir ;-)

Hahahahaha

Phew. That was amusing.
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Hey, is that your mom calling from upstairs?

Thanks Guys!

Wow, I just need to say thank you for the support from everyone. I'm thrilled that My NLW is being appreciated. I was very worried about how chapter 2 would go over. Chapter 3 is in the works, and I promise the wait won't be as long as it was for this chapter. :D

My big question to all of you is... How old do you think the Layton actually writing this blog is? :)

Hot hotdam

Very interesting. makes me wet and nipples hard as well. You just get right in there and write a great story...going back to read more

The reality?

Zip ties are brutal things to use as toys. The sharp edges lead to some nasty bruising and even nastier cuts and abrasions. And as restraints they don't work for a hill of beans. That a look at any of the numerous U-Tube videos that show how easy it is to snap them. Lacking clever or erotic writing this just wasn't very good.

Great work...

I have enjoyed your other stories, but this steps up a notch. Thank you- I look forward to more.

Fucking perfection!

For me, this is as perfect as a story can get! Sheer marvellousness! Thank you xo

Always good

my old friend, you are a wizard of erotic writing. Well done!

Thanks

to bodybychocolate (mine too!), small_town_girl and ham_sandwich for the lovely comments. STG and HS are favorite authors of mine, from whom I've learned a tremendous amount about storytelling, so their praise means a lot to me.

Please note that, although this story is set around Thanksgiving, it is NOT a holiday contest entry.

Ginny and Katy

Thanks for the reads, votes, favorites, and comments on Ginny and Katy. I was asked if there would be more, but since some of you have commented as "Anonymous" I can't reply to you directly. So I'll reply to anyone who may be interested here.

As I mention in the preface to Part 1, this story covers the period from May 14, 2011 to April 19, 2014.

It's polished, almost ready to submit, up to December 17, 2011. That period, as parts five and six, will probably be posted by the weekend.

In the nature of FYI...
It's written, but not polished, to and including New Years Day 2012
It's rough written through to January 18, 2013.
Finally, it's outlined all the way to April 19, 2014.

In short, unless the story goes south on me, there will be many more parts.

Thanks all of you for reading.

VMA

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