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Spellcheck

This is a wonderful story. Glad that the fart business didn't return. Please, though, spell check. Some miss typings made it difficult to keep in the mindset of the story. Otherwise, well done.

Wildescarlet...

... I will keep 'pantry shag' on the back burner. Love that idea. Thanks for your comment; it made me smile. You've put it correctly--I do feel like I have to justify what H & G do, but then again, the constructive criticisms are useful. Things are just getting heated between the two! Stay tuned ...

disgusting ..

Such a disgusting fuck u r spankedboy ...

Wow

I wish this was me !please keep going

This story is so well written and so endearing, I can't understand anyone ever giving it anything less than a 5.

@Anonymous

Hey, new here and don't know if I can reply directly to your post. Thanks a lot for your comment. I can find even more flaws in my text now, but I just kind of really wanted to have it finished and sent. It is indeed my first finished story. I enjoyed writing it. Hope you enjoyed reading.

Good first effort

Reads like a scene from a novel, except for the last paragraph. The characters are largely cipers to us, though. In a novel we would know more about them, I suppose, but more character development would help. Dialogue was good, too.

pallendrome

19/11/91

numerology has a lot to say about that birthdate. lol.

Wonderful read

Thoroughly enjoyed this tale. Would have liked more time spent on the scene where he receives the strap-on; the climax of his submission, but otherwise perfectly written. Hope to see more stories from you!

More Aprons

I've spent the last few days reading your Aprons for Gayle series as well as the Comments for A2W mini-series. I'm glad you've been inspired again (at least, it appears you have) and I hope you continue writing without feeling like you have to justify your creative work.
I have a penchant for any accent of the British Isles, but Scottish has got to be my favorite, so I can really hear Hamish talking in my head (sometimes not just when I'm reading!). I feel like I'm going on an odyssey with Gayle and can't wait to find what she discovers next. Will it be love???!!!
Great chapter, though I wish they had a quick pantry shag. I'll keep my eye out for the next one.
-Scarlet

Humm

She has tasted blood. She won't stop now, her hubby cannot stop her nor can her lover control her. Its interesting to see the transformation of Meena slowly and gradually into a slut and her hubby a cuck.

Loved it so far.

What's happened to the gold digger. All that was said after a date that things did not go good.

@anonymous

If that's your response to reading this scene, then I can't do anything for you.

Face palm

Are people really supposed to feel sorry for Alex because she's a slut? Well she'll break her contract quickly since she's not a sub(no matter what she tries to convince Tom of) maybe finally he'll get rid or her. Can't believe Ruth is now suddenly supposedly ok with this BS. You really had me going at first thought oh wow Tom is finally doing the responsible thing should have known better. He only cares about his needs. But I won't be reading this crap anymore think you finally cured me of the hope it'll get back on track. Thank you.

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