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Don't hold your breath.

Try in another couple of years. This is the great Rotter we are talking about. He does brilliant but he doesn't do rapid.

thanks for the update...

Thanks for the update Dan! That's what makes this site so good in my opinion, the interchange of views and info'. Good to hear you had so much positive feedback, and I'm sure Ch3 won't let us down...break out the lube lol

How I would love to be that boy

All my fantasies are along the lines of exposure to females in situations where it's acceptable/legal. Poor boy was "made" to go along with this physical, it's not that he's a pervert exposing himself. Let's have the next physical too, although making it enough different yet still professional will be interesting!

Thanks again

Once again, thank you for the response to this chapter. I'm 1500 words into Chapter Three and hope to have it finished and ready to submit tomorrow. I've never written a sex scene this explicit or this intense, so I hope I do it justice. There will be quite a bit of story of the aftermath of the class, but Chapter Three may not extend past the one in-class sex scene. I'm having fun writing it though.

Clever

But don't rush it. We want to understand your characters. For example, what was he selling to Maggie-ie. the purpose for the meeting itself?

nice work

nice work Dan, things are moving on very nicely :) I was hoping Jess would have an enjoyable time and it sure looks like she is! I'm really enjoying your writing style with all the little details that help with the visualisation. This story is becoming a real Holiday Season treat!

An amusing story. Well written too. Amusing and well written have to be good things.

Great story.

Super build-up and nice teasing. Way hot.

I do not read stories that have been stolen from other sources

You are nothing more or less than a thief - your dishonesty is abhorrent to me.

I read your explanation at the very beginning of this story of you stealing another witers' story and you developing it without permission and I jumped here to leave this comment.

Literotica itself is is at risk of future litigation and encouraging copyright theft by publishing you.

nude walk

I would go nude walking every night if I thought I could meet youF975

Yes indeed...

I plan on writing Esmerelda's story soon. I have some other story ideas, so I'm not sure that will be the next thing I write. I really appreciate the feedback, it does indeed influence what I write next.

Love this but it needs EDITITNG

I am loving your story, it needs editing for grammatical errors and the way you shift from one tense to another makes it hard to read.
However the eroticism of this young woman finding her place as a submissive although she denies it the whole way, more than makes up for the errors in spelling and tense.
Please keep developing this story line and flesh it out some more.
I love it
Randee

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