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Latest 15 Reader Comments
Great Story
Realistic, too-South Beach shops have a lot of this going on all the time
Let me help
You write well but we can make it better. Please let me edit your next chapter/writing so that the little errors don't detract from such a well told story. I enjoyed but we can make it better. T
It's the socks :)
This story pushed my buttons. I've read a lot of similar tales and they ranged from so-so to pretty hot. This one registers on the upper scale. It's the specific image of a young woman wearing nothing but socks participating in an intensely sexual activity that got me. Good imagery by the way. I like your stories. I hope you have more ideas about Mandy. Her profile reads like a young porn star just starting her career.
Learn
to have a consistent POV.
Wow!
What a story! It reminds of my own younger experiences which have become one of the central themes of my spewings here. As a young man, I had a neighbor, an older, gorgeous Hispanic woman who lived in the condo next to me. I used to flash her and masturbate in the window where she could see me. She never openly mentioned it to me, but a couple of times, while I was jerking off, she walked right in front of her window completely nude and stood there a moment looking in my direction. I've never forgotten those times.
HOT
A very exciting story indeed. Had I happened by, I would have given you a "ride" and been the perfect gentleman...fulfilling any and all of your desires.
Thank you
Dear Shannon,
I am honored by your kindness. Thank you for your comments and the awesome feedback you sent. I read your story, and holy jeezus girl...it had me strokin' halfway through! PLEASE...PLEASE (begging, totally naked on my knees) write more about your public experiences! I will try my best to come up with something with you in mind.
"As Kristen got out of the car and walked in front of Sam, she lifted her skirt to give me a brief glimpse from behind. His suspicions were confirmed."
Is it "me" or 'he'?
or "His"?
So hot!
Naked 1, I love your stories about women going naked and masturbating in public, they make me so wet. I'm an exhibitionist, and I've posted my first story here, but I wish I could do the things you write about. Please write more.
Shannon
Great story
Hopefully you will write again, you are very good at it. You slowly built things up and it was enjoyable to read. Thanks....kntoz2u@yahoo.com
who is mr.x
Mr. X is the right kind of freak. Chapter 2... Maybe :)
A Superb story !
This is one fine story with lots of detailed description which lets the reader visualize everything. Also, unlike too many stories, there is a delicious, slow, build up in tension that makes this a real page turner.
Beautifully written this story is truly erotic. I'm eagerly looking forward to reading the continuation of the tale.
Thank you so much.
Who is Mr. X?
I want to know what you ended up seeing Mr. X doing in your next chapter... That would be pretty hot I'd think
send them your love an encouragement
get more couples to do this or something--anything to open up to each other--it would improve the world more than you might believe
just please get them on birth control--over population really is a problem.
I know this is my second comment but...............
Please be warned that it includes aspects of submission and humiliation, as well as voyeurism and exhibitionism. Otherwise, enjoy!!
Otherwise enjoy??????
Apart from the beautiful writing, what else could make it so titillating? Must say I loved it... though not allowed to vote twice. Why? I have enjoyed it twice!