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Don't make him become a cockold to Ross the asshole

Great story

Keep it going. I like the aspect of the asshole Ross getting more of Donna than the friends and the guy hating it but lusting for it at the same time.

I have to say...

...that if she were my girlfriend, I would never have invited her on the camping trip. What ... she doesn't have girlfriends to hang with for a week? It was a foregone conclusion before the trip even started that she was going to end up fucking all of those guys, repeatedly ... which I where this story is going I believe.

Since she badgered her boyfriend into letting her do what she and the boys wanted, I would continue to let her be a fuck toy for this group of guys, and find someone else to marry. There is no way she is going to settle down to living with just one cock in her little snatch. Plus, there is no friendship when pussy is involved. And you can read that last sentence again, because it is true!

Also, I would have beaten the living shit out of Ross long before Chapter 3 of this story, and sewn him into his tent! But, that's just me!

Not a bad story other than a few typos, but the boyfriend needs to grow a pair!

And yes, I am a commenter who has actually written some stories!

Great start!

Exellent style and story presentation. I could see this turning into a nice little series or at least a few decent ones. Wonderful to see more and more ladies here writing. Hope it helps us guys write better for you.

-snickers-

You really like the name Karen, don't you?

good

with a big minus because of Ross. not always necessary to add an asshole to make a story hot.

Cocks and clits

Your knowledge of anatomy is a little confused.

"I was moaning and grunting each time James thrust into me. I tried to match his thrust with mine, ready to receive him. As soon as his cock made contact with my clit, the intense pleasure multiplied" - a cock does not touch a clit when it is inside a vagina ... unless of course your heroine was terribly deformed ...

What's next?

I have been following Jamie since the first chapter...what took so long? It just keeps getting hotter and hotter. Is she going to end up fucking that guy? What about her husband? Is he going to catch her? Is it going to be another year for the next part?

Super hot

These stories are super-hot. Keep 'em coming!

amazing

Great story! loved it! Two things I liked the most was no sex right away, it's all about teasing and the story leaves a lot of opportunities open to develop an a lot of directions. Since seeing her getting caught by her dad while masturbating is clearly one of his fantasies, may be she will give it to him during next visit? I sure hope so!!
Keep'em coming! Can't wait for more

good story

would be even better if she was double penetrated - a cock in her pussy and a cock in her ass, at the same time.

great story

this story had me laughing. regards peter from melbourne

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