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Loved it

Not very often I make a comment but this story was well written, flowed beautifully but most importantly very sexy. Keep writing.

A disappointing finish to a great start.

This promised to be another well plotted tale, this time on the ENF theme. The first chapters were erotic, though too rushed to believe she would get over her inhibition in so short a time. The ending descended into boring porno movie choreography, which is not what we expect from you. On the positive side, good plotting and dialog but no character development to speak of. Great that you featured tall strong women rather than the worrying 5'/150cm child women that so many other writers seem to like.

Great story

Loved everything about the way this was written: the facial-loving leading lady, the respectful gentlemen, the camera exhibition at the end. Looking forward to the rest!

Wow!!

I was a fan of you 10 years ago and I'm just amazed about the one. Please write some more!

Please keep going

Hi love the first chapter and the building of anticipation of the second
Not to mention the ideas you gave me the ladies at the next CFNM party

Loved it

What a sexy scenario. She has often done a little mild flashing when we are out shopping, but that is a new and exciting level.
Well written

Keep up the good work!

You say this isn't for everyone. Perhaps. But it's something that is definitely for me. I'm getting tired of the outrageous 10 inch dick stories and similar. Your story has the best aspect of a story which is that reading the story we feel that we're there and wonder if it is indeed fiction. It's definitely well written. I've wanted to write similar myself. I might give it another go and see what you think if you would like to read it. My email is nudeandmiddleage@yahoo.com.au.

Part 2 for How do you like your coffee?

There could be a Part 2 to this story, but I have some decisions to make and things to figure out. There is another story in progress that is likely to be submitted before I ever figure out what happens next. Thank you for reading!

Very fun

Made me warm and wet all over. lol

Great story for a first

Fantastic, keep it up maybe a part 2 and Jane goes out the next time does finally happen

flashing

Love your flashing story. I love flashing my girlfriend to truckers and driving g along side of them so they can watch me play with her pussy. Great story, kept me hard.

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