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Amazing!!

One of the best stories I honestly have ever read!

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Uh.....that's it? Where's the smut?

Absolutely fantastic

I loved the way this story wove love and lust in with the social dynamic that we have created for our selves. We are all so caught up in the almighty $$ that we forget how the simple things in life often can bring us the greatest joy.
Thank you for that reminder!

WHAT A FUCKTARD

THIS PIECE OF SHIT STORY IS STUPID. SKIMMED IT AND STINKS MINUS A BILLION SCORE.

nigger story

when I got to the big black cock I quit reading.i don't read nigger storys

Love this

Thanks for writing, loving this!

Sandwiches and Soda

In California, topless clubs can sell alcohol but nude clubs cannot. Strange rule of the ABC. Therefore, the best nude clubs have pretty good restaurants and you can have a good sandwich and sip your soda instead of getting blind drunk. Works for me. Beer and topless or Soda and naked? Pussy and 7-Up wins for me every time.

Can't wait for more

A great story. Thus You have articulated the main character's inner dialog very well. BTW is she straight, bi or lesbian?

very erotic

Thanks for the story Susan - it certainly leaves me wanting to pay more attention to dressing rooms :)

Second person pov

What is your point is writing in this point of view? I wasn't there, yet you write as if I was. My memory must be slipping.

I rarely read stories written in this manner. This was no exception. I dropped out after the second paragraph.

Awesome Stories!

Thanks for writing these. I can't wait for your next installment.

in my opinion

the mostly likely outcome of this menagerie du triage, will be one person, either Don or Sian, is pushed away. But I doubt the remaining pair would last together very long before they crash and burn. All three lovers desolated.

Maybe afterwards, once the anger and despair have lessened, a new pairing between Don and Bridget or Sian and Bridget may be possible. Long odds though for a successful RACC.

If these were real life people, I would hope they learn a valuable lesson about the dangers of gambling with the stability of relationships for temporary pleasure.

A Mama with talent

Yours is a wonderfully told, intimately passionate story, especially for a first effort. I rated it a five, only because there were no numbers above five available to me. Thank you for sharing a glimpse into a wonderfully sexual and sensual mind.

Thanks

Thank you so much for your comment. I know it takes time to leave feedback and not many people do (including me!) so I greatly appreciate any feedback I get.

My only defense is that Dana had already pretty well described Sam's body in a prior chapter and it seemed redundant to cover it again in detail. I also like to leave some of the body descriptions up to the reader to imagine the body type they like rather than being so specific that only a small percentage of readers will be satisfied. Plus I was more focused on the Exhibitionist/Voyeur part of this particular chapter than covering every detail of their body parts.

I hope you enjoy the overall story as well as the individual chapters.

And seriously, Thanks again!

great story

Love the story.. It has great characters and a good story line. Please continue.

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