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I think you are a great writer of erotic short stories. Your conversational style is excellent whether its Catherine telling you her story or Michael telling us the story.
I look forward to reading another adventure of Catherine the great!

ok, in the spirit of helpfulness ...

TPing = toilet papering the trees and bushes around a house, and perhaps the house itself, as if with garlands or Christmas lights ... a juvenile prank, not harmful, only irritating to clean up.

throwing interceptions = when a pass in American football is caught by a player of the opposing team (intercepted), the quarterback is said to have thrown the interception, like the poor fool did it on purpose, even when he's not necessarily at fault.

cornball softie ... actually an old person should be more likely to recognize these corny soft old slang terms, ha ha. Cornball is the same as corny, softie means soft ... both mean sentimental, embarrassing and wimpy.

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I found this story incredibly erotic. I would request more, please. His wife has to contact that man. Does anything else happen with Jane et al.? Great writing - hot story.

Somewhat lacking

You're a good writer and this much is clear in this story, but this is not your best. No sexual tension. Baby's response to seeing the naked man is difficult to understand. Why would she be turned on immediately? And why is he jerking off so furiously? We have no insights into his motivations but no real desire to try to find out.

Hmmmm

Delighted to share your adventure. I'm curious can you really cum twice in one orgasim ? For us it's simple hold back untill I'm sure you have, Ladies first of course. I don't need to ask if she baked something to take over. I think I'm going to read some more of your wonderfully youthful stories.
I would like to see some more current adventures of yours, I would not like to think you as alone or only reading. Sorry if the last part was creepy, I do a lot of reading here lately. *~*.

Get Away, Fast ! ! !

There is humiliation, there is payback, and then there is what went on here. He needs to get home, grab whatever he can, & get the hell away from these people as far as he can. No way could you ever be around this bunch ever again. "Linda" has shown herself to be a cold-hearted, vengeful, manipulative, hate-filled bitch!
No one that you had supposedly been in a "relationship" with would go to this extreme to prove a point based on a comment about an incident on a TV show. NO, there is something one HELL of a lot bigger that ALL OF THIS SHIT is about.
Once again, get the hell away from these people as fast & as far as you scan. You have ABSOLUTELY everything to lose if you stay, this shit is just SICK.

Thanks for the nice feedback, Psychic Annonymous Guy! I get tons of emails from fans of this series. And a lot of people have visited and read some or all of the series. So far over 15,000 visits to Pt 5, and in just the last few days over 2,000 visits to Pt. 6.

The emails are all positive, and about 75% from female readers. A lot of straight guys say this has inspired them to suck cock! I love that. Women overwhelmingly LOVE this whole storyline, and have offered a lot of suggestions and requests. I will try to include these ideas when it feels like it makes sense.

Cumming up in the next couple of Chapters:

- Chris eventually is nude while all the women and most men stay mostly dressed. The women's ultra micro Rock Out skirts will reveal more pussy as we go. Some lesbian activity, too.

- Chris will model for a fetish catalog and website. Fully gangbanged in a massive overdose of cock. Very very kinky toys and activities. All based on what women have said they want to see more of.

- More time spent on Chris and Alana's private life with lots of positive reaction from friends and fans. Mostly women and straight men. Remember, Chris is straight, and is only Gay For Pay because Alana coaxed him into it and because he needed to make money. So you won't see much of an outright gay personal life.

- They WILL be heading out to some bars and clubs, but these will not be gay so much as trendy and fashionable. Chris will compete in blowjob competitions where women volunteer their boyfriends and husbands to compete. This is based on actual competitions I got to see in the Greek Islands. My boyfriend at the time was chicken. But some really hot guys were volunteered by their girlfriends and gave AMAZING blowjobs to some huge, gorgeous cocks, while a crowd of about 150 people cheered. After the competition, these guys were swarmed by the hottest women in the club. I remember thinking, if giving the best blowjob means you attract the hottest girls, how is that "gay"? And, what guy wouldn't suck cock for that reward?

Sexy and deliciously arousing...

Love reading about your naughty teasing, what a sexy turn on...

Sounds like fun

Too bad the other wife us such a drag,but it dfoes mean the exposure needs a lot of planning. The story does move a little slow. It's distressing that there is no sexual contact between Jan and her husband.

great!

Excellent story in this genre - up with the best of them!

Psychic guy here.Loved this instalment.

1) Loved the fact that Chris was almost completely undressed while others were almost completely dressed or dressed completely.
2) Loved that you did not have Chris dress.In the next chapter can we have Chris in his undressed state realizing he is the only one naked and Natalie or trish prolonging it
Since you have told that you would love to hear our ideas.
1)A totally CMNM Scenario .
2)A look at their home life.Something like after the photoshoot..how they progress.You have shown how she dominated him little in the bedroom..now how about how it affects them in other placesNot too domineering but fun domineering.
3)She setting something between her gay friend/s when she invites them to their home (with Chris's permission) who have crush on Chris and Chris is in one of the sexy garments he modelled.
4)Visit to gay bar.

Rocking story!

Way to go, TSB (Tiny String Bikini). Other than the multiple stories I've recently read from The Sparks Zone, I have not read anything as 'titilating' as this current example of unwilling exposure. Please write more in this vein, even completing this story to a satisfyingly sexy ending. Please write more, TSB. I'll be looking for you.
YOMEYO

Maybe I'm getting too old!

Can some please translate this into English for me.

"TP a house"...?
"cornball softie"...?
"threw three interceptions"...?

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