Sci-Fi & Fantasy Story Comments

Nice start, well written!

Dirayr commanded? I forgot about that. I'd even forgotten how Payl ran and tackled Ljudevit. You know what? Seems like Kanni is basically like Langoret...just not in the "sister" sense.

So he's 16, but he's small because he was sickly? Or he's 8? Otherwise a fun start

I'm really enjoying this one.

Very addictive, 5 stars again.

It seems you've actually slowed down enough to give us some good details on the characters.

Definitely an improvement. :)

You guys ... you are all fucking awesome.

This chapter was a roller coaster of emotions. I felt really sad that some key characters had to die.

Best chapter yet.

keep them coming your great at this series I would like a couple chapters per month but I won't be greedy

Another great chapter...I hope the next one comes fast.

ohhh please continue writing, it's rare to find a story this compelling

This is an incredibly beautiful story. There are not enough words to describe how amazing this story is.

Don't like the slavery and think it would ultimately be a destabilizing factor in society.

I have really enjoyed this series. I guess I startedreadibg it over 18 months ago. I enjoy your character development and the interaction between them. The wives are each unique, not cookie cutter versions of each. The sex is good but the story is better. Thanks for writing it.

Turart

oooOOOOOHH, getting creepy goood.

At least finish what you started🫠🤌

Good story, lots of fun. Would like to read more from you. The him/her and his/hers got a little mixed up and confused me. Other than that great read!

A good guy stops some bad guys from hurting people, and everyone tells the good guy that he did the wrong thing. Why do people do that?

I hope you keep this going!

Short chapter feels rushed not as good as the other parts. Please don't rush things let it flow so it can stay good.

I agree with the others. The first part was amazing, the second one was a let-down.

Too much stuff is happening to fast. The new Linda full of testosterone is despicable.

This is not a bad concept as it plausible that the sudden hormone switch changed her. The breach of trust...

Great story! Hope there is more coming!

Great episode as always, always eager for more of this story.

I don't know "what are you doing god-bro?" Just doesn't have the same ring to it XD

6 stars at least

I suspect Esmeralda had attached a protective spirit to him. We'll see :)

Nice épisode, my guts tell me that things are about to get messy with his friends knowing and becoming liabilities.

RJW, I have no idea why you phrased your comments at the end of the chapter as you did but I am sorry you felt the need to do so.

While the story concept has lots of ways it could go sideways, you have been thoughtful in your writing and your character development. Those have resulted...

While this story isn't all that kinky, it's really cute and romantic, and I love the worldbuilding and the characterization of the characters. Keep up the great work :)

The story continues to get more depth and the character development is deeping.

Thank you for sharing your creativity with all of us. I appreciate the work you do represented with each chapter.

Jim

Hi James, hope you are doing well. I'm really pleased your are publishing. I checked amazon, seems all they have are 8 volumes, do you plan to put the rest on there? whats the plan mate, you have a lot of fans rooting for you.

love how he handled James!

fergus being that drunk was hilarious, tho I would have like to seen his wife get a bit miffed and maybe lay him out for getting drunk.

Outstanding chapter! What a delight to read.

I concur with BruceWo.

Five stars, without any alternative to vote anything else.

Given the General's disposition, it would not surprise me if there was a wealthy man with the same disposition of the rich pricks in the Bunker Authority that the General had of Frank after the hearing. That man could probably afford to pay a trained sniper (who was not selected for...

Excellent.

I realy liked this story. Keep on writing!!

It’s an interesting idea so far. Could use.. a lot of work and sadly the second is definitely worse than the first. It’s cool though, all skills need practice, even writing. Feels like some people need a reminder that they’re on a free site reading free stuff. No one is saying it...