Mature & Age Difference Story Comments

I have something in my eye making it become watery ... must be a reaction to some dust!

NOT bad... outside of the reference to "packing behind his fly" but not "looking up to HIS face"!

I stopped there.

Lowest-possible score, due to countless mistakes on the first Page, before I could finish the conversation!

I couldn't finish the first Page. Something about "in all his naked his glory" (or something like that), & then "I couldn't take my off him". I wouldn't submit something with BOTH of those mistakes to a site at all, let alone a contest!!!

Imagine if you could spell the word properly!!!

THAT is where you lost me.

Great plot? Check

Multiple characters introduced and fully fleshed out? Check

Main characters loveable? Check and Check

Excellent writing? Check

Believable? Check

Recommendation? Don't miss this one

The Hoary Cleric

Hey where is the much needed continuation of this story?????

Very realistic. Youth sports have gotten many people together. Travel teams have many interesting relationships.

cuckold, eww

continue your older stories.....they are solid

He should have flipped her over on her knees and done her doggy....then anal!!

I keep reading this in the voice of Dennis the boss on the it crowd and it ruined it for me XD

oh what a fantastic story .. all that sucking clitty and tonguing ... this was wonderful ... i love old men eating cunt, licking and sucking ... it's delicious ... and they were young ... i like when old and older men lick and suck cunnies and titties .. excellent work

Thought it was a good story, but the Annie storyline seemed like an unnecessary add on with no positive ending. Good all-around though.

Loved it, thank you

Please continue the next chapter

Looks like Mom really likes to getting her pussy taken care of

in erstr Linie geht es doch hier um Sex Geschichten. Alles andere ist beiwerk. Wobei ich mir als Deutscher maehr anfagen aus Deutschland wünsche. Ob mirr die Geschichten gefallen. Auch Kommentare lesen macht Spass. Bespnders die Kommentare von Frauen.

Lucky man.

A really great story ! 5 from me.

These stories started out good but the more you read the dumber they are

Very, very good story!!!!!!

Excellent debut! 5 stars. Hope to see more stories.

WOW! I loved it. Want another chapter? Of course! I want a whole series. I am 68 and have a flirtatious relationship with a 30 year old bikini barista. I have fantasized about her for quite some time. This was a wonderful story that encapsuled one of my own fantasies about her....

I grew up fishing on the mostly shallow cypress bottom lakes of north Louisiana. The description of this habitat in this story is very accurate.

Sadly, I never encountered any ladies quite like these out on the water. Guess I just need to keep looking.

Great little series!!!!!!!!!! Wish there was more!!

'I watched her beasts move under the tight t-shirt out of the corner of my eye'

OK, I know 'beasts' is just a typo, but it's a pretty hilarious typo.

Like the others, I thought this story was finished. glad to see it isn't. Would give the Rocky story a run for its money. Can't wait for the next chapter. 5/5

Not many stories on Lit talk about love like this one. While the sex is awfully good, if not a little over the top, it's the love that makes it even better.

Being retired military myself, I like the story line and your descriptions.

I have a deep fetish for undersexed and closet kink mature ladies. Your story was written for me ;)

Next chapter please

Izzy or ain’t she?

Hmmmm as another woman of a certain age, I enjoyed this. Memories of something I tried too.....

Great story. Thank you.

I'm more interested in the possibilities with Toby than anything else in this chapter.

Excellent! Thanks.