Mind Control Story Comments

Very nice, original piece. I like these kind of stories. Great job.

Even under hypnosis a person will not do anything they morally object o.

What an outstanding chapter!

Aoife needs to be vaccinated soon. The other two are goners. Will that be the resolution? Those two so sick they can not stop her?

It was hard waiting for this installment. But stuff happens. As far as I know, you are not a machine. With humans things sometimes happen.

The story...

Great stuff!

I'm sure you will find a way to bring her back and to Ethan's team, and I will enjoy that process immediately, but that last scene with the baby made me think about all of the other babies that were left after parents died, and what happened to them......

Gripping writing utterly outstanding, thank you

Nice, this has real potential.

Very nice touch with both Stephen and Tony being a mensch, here! A bit of wholesomeness goes a long way.

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I love how you didn't "sugar coat" anything - neither the characters nor their behaviour is in any way glamourous, not even in a "scandalous sexy" kind of way.

Even the protagonist is not entirely sympathetic (in the way she thinks about other people) but if anything that only makes...

Woah, 13 absolutely great pages. Thank you

Wonderful, how the brutal facts are wrapped in a bit of mystery and Abi’s constant bewilderment about her own behaviour. This renders a great service to the sensitive reader to enjoy the story. I love the setting and the characters, although culturally I cannot always follow one hundred...

Trash person getting a chance to ruin people really isn't fun.

Mind control is when someone is controlling you, I don't see that here.

I hope this isn’t the end of the story

As a recent diabetic, mad props for including it as a major plot point, and in a realistic manner as well.

Author, you have way too many random people fucking endlessly while constantly narrating their own repetitive sex activity to each other. The reader stopped caring about anybody since you supplied zero character development and scarcely any plot advancement beyond adding more women...

why not delete it and repost the correct story?

Not much in the concept of intimate lesbian copulation. But still plenty of stimulation. 😝😜😋❗

So sweet - really good

Hilarious and you have the sociopath mindset down pat!

The sex scenes are actually the worst aspect of your stories because you seem to just cut and paste the same handful of phrases again and again with just the names substituted for each girl. You don't even keep track of which orifice your MC is penetrating from one sentence to the...

@ironman1017 you what? He's not a cuck at all? I feel like you aren't really understanding what you're reading here, based on the questions you're asking

Clumsy repetitive writing. Mainly skimming through it all to see who's knocked up first.

A welcome take on the "addictive cum" genre! Can't wait to read more!

Thank you.

13 pages man, what a chunk.

A huge chunk of awesome. You weave a great story.

Oh, but one oopsie. West Virginia did not exist in 1821. West Virginia was formed by 48 counties that succeeded from Virginia when Virginia succeeded from the US. That was early 1860's.

Strangely erotic to me, even though one fetish is totally a turn off to me.

If it was me I would have had Rick suck the cocks clean .

Brilliant, what an instalment

Hoping for more interaction with her hot momma😜❗

I gave you 4 stars despite the fact that you have clearly never read even a single one of the books of Gor. To label them as "smut" proves that fact. I have read the entire original series of 25 books numerous times and know for a fact that there is not a single explicit scene anywhere...

Excellent. Warrants a follow-up, don't you think?

I love your work!