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Nothing like telling it like it is. You're one hell of a writer, much needed in this category. (ML)

Relieved!

When I saw the subject matter, dementia, I was curious how on earth there could be any sexual content. Part way through reading I thought the only tasteful way of introducing sex would be a retrospective on happier times, but no, it was simply a heart wrenching account of a lady and her family in pain. Do hope you cope with this difficult time in your life.

Since readers are easily confused...

...There are two overlapping stories told here. One story in ITALIC font and another story in REGULAR font.

Since some of you seem to lack the ability to multi-task (that's why your car insurance is so high). First read the Italic font story before you read the Regular font story.

The paragraphs in Italic Font are the holographic letter as written by the dying wife.

The paragraphs in Regular font are the dying wife's thoughts, a sub-vocal conversation with herself.

Now go back to the beginning and read both stories in sequence and your confusion will be cleared.

You're welcomed.

Capitol

It's Capitol Hill, not Capital Hill.

thank you for your comment

Hi,
First; thank you very much for your comment. I really appreciate how you tried to help me.

You've really helped me to see what a whiny ditz I've been. I should just be obeying unconditionally, I see that now.

I am sorry for being so hopeless.

Ally. X

Hopeless

It makes no sense, your willing to submit to Jack but you won't do everything he tells you without assurance. If he's as dominating as he sounds, then he won't be too happy.

Wow!

Short and to the point. He hit all the points out of the cheaters' handbook of excuses.
He did what he had to do and didn't cry about it. She got what she deserved. He didn't buy into the "I Love only you" crap that cheaters always use after they are caught. Well Done and Thank You for writing it. Now I have to go and read all your stories.

CAUGHT IN THE CROSS HAIRS

it was EZ cum EZ go, life in the mid-stream. TK U MLJ LV NV

Jack

Is now almost as bad as Santos and is without any positive qualities at all.

wtf

the story just ends like that ? there is no ending !!!

I feel the total opposite. You ruined the fucking story for me. The whole thing that made this story work for me was he was wronged and looking to right that wrong. However he doesn't go forward to better himself instead he becomes just like Santos.

A nice tie-up to a good story. You did suprise me with the ending....Jack continuing his activities and he and Brit not living happily ever after. Good to see you didn't go the fairy tale route. A well written story, good job.

Thank you for your comment

Thank you for your comment. I hope Jack also finds it sincere.
Sorry about the misspelling - I can be such a ditz.

Love,
Ally. X

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