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CAUGHT IN THE CROSS HAIRS

it was EZ cum EZ go, life in the mid-stream. TK U MLJ LV NV

Jack

Is now almost as bad as Santos and is without any positive qualities at all.

wtf

the story just ends like that ? there is no ending !!!

I feel the total opposite. You ruined the fucking story for me. The whole thing that made this story work for me was he was wronged and looking to right that wrong. However he doesn't go forward to better himself instead he becomes just like Santos.

A nice tie-up to a good story. You did suprise me with the ending....Jack continuing his activities and he and Brit not living happily ever after. Good to see you didn't go the fairy tale route. A well written story, good job.

Thank you for your comment

Thank you for your comment. I hope Jack also finds it sincere.
Sorry about the misspelling - I can be such a ditz.

Love,
Ally. X

Very earnest, very hot.

You misspelled "degradation" as "degradatation" in your word tags.

Jack of Diamonds is a hard card to find.

Never delete my comment again. I'll repeat myself: make the next letter
more detailed if you really do want to serve me.

Read your story 'cum sponge' - fact not fiction is my guess and cum sponge is certainly an appropriate moniker for you Ally.

Do not disappoint me again.

J of D

Thank you!

I am glad that you liked it. I had been searching this kind of story/experience for a long time. I feel vulnerable people who does not take care of themselves in the environment that my story has, should be subject to punishment or something like that. It has been one of the greatest fantasies for a long time!

Frisky little tale

I like this story. The all dialogue format seems to work in this story very nicely. I like the characters and the imminent conflict both I the matches and between the competitors.

Grammar and syntax errors are distracting.

Not worth it.

Too dumb a start to waste my time with. One star.

life on lifes terms

i divorced my first wife for most of the reasons stated in his letter. as long as i said nothing with regard to her actions, i was rewarded with sex as long as she got to buy what she wanted, say what ever venom was on her mind, and of course nothing could be said about girls night out. you know, just a little harmless fun. one night she forgot to come home. she came home to 1/2 of everything gone and a note that said "congratulations! you are being served today!" the shit storm that followed was epic. hey wait, i've read that story here! i loved this, no followup is needed. good work.

Well done

Men need to be needed and that man will feel needed. Bravo. Great read.

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