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Outstanding!

The casual tone of this was perfect--so different, and really good. Your excitement came through, which was great.

You conveyed an innocent sort of sexiness that's pure turn-on. Great job!

CAN'T SAY I EVEN LIKED IT A LITTLE

TOO ASTRINGENT AND ASCERBIC. LIKE THOSE WORDS HUH. WELL THE LETTER WAS A PILE OF RANTINGS AND NOTHING ELSE. NO CHARECTER BUILD UP OR BEING ABLE TO BE DRAWN INTO THE STORY. NOPE NOT WORTH THE READ AND EVEN VOTING ON. WENT DOWN THE CRAPPER AFTER FIRST PARAGRAPH. LEARN TO WRITE OR QUIT.

Huh

"And trusting me for yours"
Out of that whole detail listing, these are the only words that even remotely hint that HE will actually deign to possibly do something that SHE might enjoy because she enjoys it. While the core of D/s is what is considered 'power imbalance,' I find it empty, unrealistic and unhealthy for the relationship to be as lopsided as this is described. The trope of her pleasure being ONLY found through his pleasure is a hollow thing.

Calm down, you little slut--just kidding--

and read Lucie Brock- Broido (sp?) "The Master Letters."

Then, sweet Emily D.

Bunny

Liked it...

...you sure know how to write letters...

How quickly I became caught up in this story. So well done

Well done

I enjoyed this......vivid wordsmithing. I look forward to more of your writing. Thanks,

As the other comment reported, short but hot

Love this little letter, I hope the woman I chat with feel the same way after my sessions with her. I love the idea of invading someones thoughts and feelings through flirting and teasing. Also love giving incredible fantasies and memories. The only thing better is doing it in person. Thank you

Pause for laughter...

I couldn't stop chuckling. I had to stop to wipe my eyes. I don't know if you meant it to be super funny, or if maybe I had somehow turned my funny bone up to 11, but I REALLY enjoyed this. It wasn't so much that it was sexual...which it was, but I loved the back and forths. Good job.

Somcerely, Payenbrant

MY thoughts

Having just finished reading all of your 25 stories, I have to say that, except for some much-needed editing, they were good, BUT, I was left with the impression that the majority of the stories were incomplete. Perhaps that is just your style. It's like I had only been able to eat half of my steak - I wasn't quite satisfied.

On another subject, I enjoyed the stories with the "Chance" and "Remy" characters, and would hope that you would continue their series.

To summarize, IMO, you are a better author than some, and some authors are better than you. Keep writing!

RacfGuy

for the warrior it's no WHAT?

No SWEAT? Are you kidding me? Tell me you're fucking telling a poorly sarcastic joke. It may be "no sweat" for the REMFs and Fobbies who have nothing better to do than make headaches for real soldiers, airmen, and marines but it's a fuckall of a lot worse for the poor Valiant Trooper (irony and tongue planted firmly in cheek there) of Das Republik that is busy actually SEEING the elephant face to "unarmed" "civilian" Taliban recon team. (As opposed to face to face...get it? K.) In that instance it's less "no sweat" more "do I fire on the ID'd spies (no uni/identifying colors or markers+combat ops/recon activities=spy=shoot on sight per Geneva convention) and thereby prevent them from phoning in the details of my unit's OP, numbers, armament, etc to unknown enemy forces who will then use that Intel to achieve the maximum possible degree of tactical advantage with which to assault and potentially devastate my command? Do I take said action despite my knowledge that doing so will almost certainly result in my prompt post engagement court martial, dishonorable discharge, and imprisonment for the insane charge of murder 1 in a live combat zone? Or do I abstain from that action, soak up the casualties that result, and, if I live, take my medal like a good little soldier? All the while hating myself, my civilian commanders and their appointees, and the monstrosity my beloved Army has become? That, my friend, is just a TINY example of the day to day clustershitfuck that combat personnel, as we now so euphemistically term them, must deal with. No sweat, indeed, you piece of quivering filth. It is those who remain BEHIND that face "no sweat", I assure you of that. And I'll go no further in " justifying" that absolutely undeniable statement of fact that you will choose to treat as opinion, and bigoted one at that, fool that you are, than saying this: any seasoned military wife worth her treasured ovaries would tell you the same Goddamn thing. No exceptions. Imbecile.

*teary eyed*
i began reading your series "Mastering Bella". You are an amazing writer... the way you took us through the blossoming of a new slave.... And then to continue with the growth of her love and trust in her Master with "Owning Bella". i'll admit that i was a bit shocked to find out Vince was Mel's son, but i knew he had to be behind at least part of what was going on. Thank you so very much for sharing the good and the bad of Mel & His Ellie's time together. i look forward to reading "Possessing Bella". In fact, i plan on starting to read it in just a few minutes. *grins*

Hot story

Really worked for me, so I went to look for a girl on there. Your story had me check out omegle. Definitely didn't live up to this story or go anywhere like it. Still I enjoyed reading this. Good work, wish there was more like it.

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