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What about slapping that damn Court shrink, who was against the husband's position the whole way? Doesn't the shrink know about DNA and when it can be obtained? Shrinks are MD's first. This faux-pas dropped one full star.

He might get replaced by Ted soon, if Ted is willing to share her, too.

IDK. This is her third relationship where her lover stripped her naked and dominated her. Once could be a mistake, and twice a weird coincidence, but a third one? I'm starting to see a pattern...

Another dead account.

Loving both the short stories series, something different.

I do think it would help to give a motif for those involved . Maybe her husband doesn't pay her any attention anymore, or they didn't marry for love, they married because she gotten pregnant. She could have caught him peeing...

I hope Montgomery ends up giving a girl something Wolfe can't.

This is really good.

Thanks for sharing.

Love Blake the cock-sucking cum-slurping slut!

Thanks for your writing,

story was weird for a while but ended up enjoyable.

Epilog was a bit quick.

My unprompted epilogue.

Chris is discharged from the mental hospital, fully understanding why she tried to end her life, the pain she caused and how to cope with her guilt.

With Lindy's knowledge and...

Sounds almost like a fairy tale at the end, and hard to believe. But a nice story.

Hot hot hot! Suck that huge cock!

Brilliantly hilarious! Verrrry well done.

So fun & love the physical descriptions! Cock-sucking straight ahead!

too many "final warnings", otherwise it was good drama.

Jan’s lawyer would have demanded part of the settlements.

I am sure it has its market, but like your first reviewer said there would be too much evidence not to convict, oh and as for her "The pictures would be up forever," threat, one public court case and as long as there was enough doubt, (even if she was found not guilty) backed by a...

Nice uncomplicated short story. Carrie will get hers soon enough. Living with her parents, pregnant, Carrie just anothr knocked up cheating slut. It will be a fight for Carrie and Lisa to get any child support at all from Gerald. In addition, Carrie will have a tough time finding...

He dumped her because she was kissing his friend. Okay, but his ie ducked her and married her and now she’s less tainted? Now his friend can laugh at him as he is now getting her used pussy ass and mouth. Good deal?

Fabulous read, thank you for sharing your work.

This kind of second person narrative makes me crazy. Narrator cannot possibly know what I'm thinking, nor what I'm doing when I'm not there. And telling me things that have happened to me, or that I've already done is an annoying waste of time. Why would you do that? I cut bait after...

Great story. The Queen is cold blooded saying what she did.

Almost humorous in context, but a well delivered story. It never fails to amaze me just how many men enjoy their partners to play with others. I consider all these males very lucky indeed, as sex with others is super erotic and long may the case be for "shared wives" to continue in...

Nice story, but it it is always risky when only one spouse gets the outside sex. I agree with the previous Anonymous’ comment that “even if he has to pay” for sex - with the wife’s knowledge and approval, of course.

I guess someone missed her flight! lol

Short and sweet just how I like it as black on white is very erotic no matter how big the cock, however we are all subject to the Black & Hung description that it would have been disappointing if he didn't follow the norm with his size. Asian women also have a great skill in taking...

I'm giving you 5 stars for pure unadulterated debauchery.

You sick bastard.

I don't know how tall Collin is, in my mind he was imposing (he is a bully), so over 5'10 ?

Words elude me.

Very well done. Better editing than some of the others but all I've read are very good. This one was excellent.

Have no idea why it was written or why I actually read all of it.

Not my cup of tea I'm afraid, I don't ever think family intercourse can be justified no matter how the links are separated. (eg, over age limit & Step- Dad) are no excuse, this is still a young virgin woman being taken advantage of.

Disgraceful is my take on this sordid story. Shame...

Great story! The rating this has is more than justified. 5 stars from me for sure. You need to have more stories.

Kelly and Kathy! Have you no imagination concerning names?

@Aspergerd27 - Anything, always, I am a follower of your work anyway, and a learner, if my writings inspires you, please, do ALL of us a favor and go ahead. Full blessing (send me the link please, altough I am following you so)