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Thanks for the much awaited update!

Comment By: Anonymous

I've waited for over a year for an update, I am extremely glad that you have finally decided to continue the story. I do hope more updates on a frequent basis? Thanks a lot...

Submission Title:  Shadow Of The Wolf Ch. 11 - 16  Comment(s)
Category:  NonHuman
Author:  blackduchess

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when are yu going to update ....

Comment By: daedee

hey this wait is KILLING me can yu pls update soon . and i agree Alex is going to flip his shit and jt is going to be so mad and not talk to her and Eli is going to be heartbroken ...... like she said its just sex with jt and with Eli it will be more but what about Alex ? how dose he fit into the picture. cant wait for more

Submission Title:  A Broken Family Ch. 08 - 15  Comment(s)
Category:  Incest/Taboo
Author:  HollyBranch

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BEST STORY EVER!!!

Comment By: Anonymous

This is one of the BEST STORIES I have ever read! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! I CANT WAIT FOR CHAPTER 18!!

Submission Title:  The Last Tritan Ch. 17 - 72  Comment(s)
Category:  NonConsent/Reluctance
Author:  WaterBurn

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Proof Reader

Comment By: EroticWriter0826

Dude...you REALLY need a proof reader.

...to gaze a pond....??? Really? You're looking at a small body of water?

Submission Title:  Friends & Family Ch. 03 - 3  Comment(s)
Category:  Incest/Taboo
Author:  kingswede

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this one was good but weak to me

Comment By: Anonymous

Banks in the end was harder on himself and for what. Useless fucking kids and a whore wife, he should have done like in the original story and moved on with the kid. I looked at all the comments about Huedogg2's version and how cruel he was to take the kid, but no one talked about how cruel it was not to tell him he had a kid. Most of this story was good, but I would been done with all of them.

Submission Title:  Second Chances - 90  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  FD45

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Take me up the ass...

Comment By: Anonymous

aaaah... what a deep anal satisfaction to be stretched like that…

Submission Title:  Bedtime Story for My Pet #02 - 6  Comment(s)
Category:  Text With Audio
Author:  zenmackie

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So true

Comment By: xzibir

German being my native tongue as well, I can only vigorously nod in agreement, German is a terrible language when it comes to sex. Dirty talk and even casual talk about sex must be either of very limited vocabulary or very silly. Genitalia for example: I don't know a single german word for pussy that isn't ridiculous or vulgar in a not-sexy way: "Muschi" (which is the direct translation of pussy I guess) makes me think of lonely old ladies talking to their cats, "Fotze" (even worse Votze) is so harsh and insulting, makes me think of an Ugly German spitting out the word for "down there". "Möse" is okay I guess but still sounds kinda silly.

A lot of the really stupid wannabe-dirty phrases in German seem to come directly from the shitty (as in aweful, not as in Scheisse) porn movies available in Germany. Not only the porn flicks from Germany but even foreign movies are re-dubbed by silly actors that exchange moaning and bizarre statements of the obvious ("Ja, steck mir deinen Schwanz tief in die Fotze. Deine Fickstange fühlt sich so geil an." -- "Yes, stick your dick deep into my cunt. Your fuck stick makes me so horny" see how much better, though still very silly, that sounds in English?).

Anyway, thanks for sharing, made my day.

Submission Title:  How (Not) to Dirty Talk in German - 39  Comment(s)
Category:  How To
Author:  Munachi

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To be continued.....

Comment By: Anonymous

I'm sorry to ask for more and more, but there are things left unsaid. Foremost in my mind is Polly and begs the question, do they ever (when will they ever) make love? Just like Reverend Simmons and Melinda. Carrie is some 21yrs older than John and will likely someday leave John alone when she joins her father. Will Polly take her place and try to fill her father's life when that happens? It would be logical and inline with the gist of the storyline to suppose Polly and John someday become husband and wife. It would be good to see in the story that someday Carrie and Polly have a talk to arrange for John not to be alone. To see if her daughter can love her son when she is gone and to make certain that Polly knows she has her mom's blessing if it happens. It is mentioned more than once, or hinted at, that Molly is a minister. Early in the series you mentioned that she was a Divinity student and then toward the end you let it slip that she is a Minister. My question is, did she establish and build a church in the area, or did she take over the Pastorate in the local church when their Preacher retired or passed away? Also, curiosity compells me to ask what happened to Bill and Emma's Boy and Girl? They are pretty much left behind and if you did decide to continue or wrap up the Family Saga, their situation really should be touched on as would be whether Tommy becomes a father to Molly's baby(ies?). It is a great story as it is, but if you don't feel the need to continue to explore the path these families take, then an Epilogue Chapter would be in order, so that your readers can finally know what happens and where this account of their family ends. Could the Twin brothers fall to the family tradition, eventually? They're so close, could they be living a gay lifestyle there in the cabin that their dad left them? Maybe getting together after their tours of duty are completed? It is possible and could be another dynamic that could begin to heal old wounds by bringing the two halves of Carrie's family back into her circle of love where she, and they, can finally accept - love - and need each other. Just exploring some possibilities, but a final wrap-up chapter that puts questions to rest would be much appreciated even as a continuation would be. It is almost a book as it is, why not go the extra mile for even more flavor as sweet as it is already.

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I'm so Ready for a Vaction

Comment By: CaliforniaWino92

Glad to see the trio is off having a good time. I know I am keeping up with the saga. Wonder if there will be any drama or plot twists while in Nicaragua?

Submission Title:  You Are My Home Ch. 12 - 2  Comment(s)
Category:  Mature
Author:  edsachry

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Stupid

Comment By: Anonymous

This story is horrible. It is not made any better by the poor English he writes in. I applauded you for having a second language but if you want to write in English have someone proof read it for you.

Submission Title:  Her Horrible Holiday - 29  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  Winterfrog

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Really enjoyed it!

Comment By: honey_licker1124

I see from your submission page this is your first on LW. It is very expressive with adjectives that makes it like you are really there. The description of Lisa was complete and very good. So I think this is not your first erotic story.
I figured out early that they were husband and wife, but when he said he would text her with instructions, I was certain. She had not given him her cell number, had he?

I copied down three word usage problems:
"As her unconsciously turned to scan the room once more, " should have been "she"

"as the bar slide lower, near her ankles, " should have been "slid"

"as one ones at her wrist did." I suppose it should have been "as the ones at the wrist..."
Also, he took the leg stretcher bar off, laid her on the bed and then spooned against her, but there was no mention of taking off of the handcuffs or black silk blindfold.

All in all, I enjoyed it, and look forward to your next story. 5 *'s despite the errors.

Submission Title:  Date Night - 4  Comment(s)
Category:  Loving Wives
Author:  h3donist_prime

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Part 1 of more?

Comment By: Cletis

I suspected something like that ending. I hope you continue with chapter 2 and more.

Submission Title:  The Great Zoltan and Red Bert - 1  Comment(s)
Category:  Mind Control
Author:  Frightening

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AWESOME!

Comment By: Anonymous

That was incredibly well written. kept me hard throughout, and loved every moment of it, and, although i'm not into the gay stuff, I still thought it was well done, and not over bearing.!!!

Submission Title:  My Twentieth Birthday - 5  Comment(s)
Category:  Incest/Taboo
Author:  tgirl_Mary

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a good story

Comment By: qwikguy

I enjoyed your story....

Submission Title:  Robin Gets Her Revenge - 6  Comment(s)
Category:  NonConsent/Reluctance
Author:  maxmaypo

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What a great story

Comment By: tndriver53

Bravo to you for sharing this part of your life and your feelings then and now I would venture to say El Dumbo was fortunate to have the pleasure and obvious passion of your company I have the feeling if a man were fortunate enough to have your company today it would be no less enjoyable

Submission Title:  A Participant Answers - 3  Comment(s)
Category:  Mature
Author:  oldladymartha

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