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wonderful wife

Comment By: Anonymous

have enjoyed these stories hope Carla gets up to more adventures

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Sit on me Mum!

Comment By: Anonymous

Please continue. They must do more outrageous exhibitionist stuff. Its so horny!

Submission Title:  Taking Mom to the Movies - 15  Comment(s)
Category:  Incest/Taboo
Author:  HeyAll

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spunktastic!!!

Comment By: Anonymous

I'd die to be degraded by mistress rihanna. Delicious domination. Awesome stories xxxx

Submission Title:  Beyonce in Bondage Ch. 07 - 9  Comment(s)
Category:  Celebrities
Author:  TheDarkCloud

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Overstress !

Comment By: Anonymous

With all of Diane's physical & psychological stress over recent times during her return to Sessia, wonder if it might result in another dream of Bathory Prison? Maybe this time it would be even more erotic then her previous dream experience & include the adoring Lexi, Gretchen's somewhat malicious rival Viv, her muscular Sessian physical trainer & Officer Ryan (now rather forgotten in the Return series) as major prison antagonists for our poor dear?!

Submission Title:  Return to Sessia Ch. 06 - 8  Comment(s)
Category:  BDSM
Author:  Schlank

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nope

Comment By: rightbank

not one of the better alternative endings.

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Thank you for the enlightenment Ash...

Comment By: HoneyAdored

...I have Googled and I am now currently browsing his FB Page :-)

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Comment By: Rmcbeal

Ambien is some crazy stuff. My wife appears to be highly stoned if she doesn't get straight to bed. With some of the stuff I've seen my wife do, this is a totally believable story.

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next next!!!

Comment By: win_nie

please say the next chp11 is being posted now please please!!

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Comment By: thebuffalo

I'm impressed! Well written, reasonably "hot" and more than a bit unique in plot. Good job.

Submission Title:  Tempo - 2  Comment(s)
Category:  Exhibitionist & Voyeur
Author:  Frank_Lee

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Beautiful story, beautifully written.

Comment By: Anonymous

A beautiful love story very fitting of Valentine's Day! While I spent more time with the tablet today than I intended, it was worth every minute!

Submission Title:  The Case of the Sneaky Valentine - 24  Comment(s)
Category:  Lesbian Sex
Author:  ScattySue

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Hot...sexy start!

Comment By: arrowglass

I have to agree...more please! I like the way you write!

Submission Title:  Consideration - 2  Comment(s)
Category:  Erotic Couplings
Author:  Ashson

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Comment By: CatSleek

I think it would be great for us to have a little access to Asher's emotions. We 'feel' too much of Mila and what she feels regarding the situation with Asher. However, what is missing is the link from Asher to Mila. Now, I know you are telling this story from Mila's perspective but perhaps you could look into a literary tool or device that could be utilized to let us know how Asher feels towards Mila (I'm sorry I can't point any out at the moment but I'll do some research on it and hopefully have some suggestions for you to look at soon). My uneducated guess is that even though he has a better control over how he shows emotions, he's probably just as confused about the different feelings that may arise towards Mila. Does he want to fuck her so much most of the time that it scares him? Or is the lust just at normal levels? Is there any jealousy at the thought of her belonging to another? Does his fear for her safety go beyond the primal instinct to survive through their bond? What are his compassion levels towards her? What does he think about his feelings and how is he handling them? An easy way to do this might be for him to let his shield down (may be by accident) so Mila can 'feel' his feelings. You don't have to show everything all at once; a little here and there should build up a good momentum because I can sort of predict one possible direction this story may go (just one possibility out of many). If you are taking this story down the 'they shared a transcendental connection' part at the end, now will be a good time in the story to build up the pace for that later so that it won't come as a shock. However, if your story is taking a different direction then please ignore all of what I have written. You are a great writer, well done on producing another fabulous chapter! I look forward to reading more :)

Submission Title:  The Last Tritan Ch. 22 - 96  Comment(s)
Category:  NonConsent/Reluctance
Author:  WaterBurn

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Loved this one

Comment By: drdetroit019

I always read your stories, and this one is the best yet. Thanks

Submission Title:  A Man in Turmoil - 83  Comment(s)
Category:  Romance
Author:  DG Hear

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Comment By: redlion75

she is fucking psycho and could face charges for that stupid shit.

Submission Title:  Mr. Woods, Are You Okay? - 4  Comment(s)
Category:  Interracial Love
Author:  Bob_6

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Funny

Comment By: Humpdee84

That's all that matters, it's funny, VERY funny. Keep it up. I did have some difficulty understanding the story now and then, when I took my time and paid attention, I had not issues and/or skimmed past the difficult parts. I'm not English! I'm not expected to get EVERYTHING, nor do I demand that you cater to me. You're an awesome writer, just keep going.

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