Better story than others have rated

I like this one. It's different from the other "spank, whine, fuck" stories in the bdsm category. Sure it has anal, but why not? It does need some cleaning up in the middle, but otherwise not a bad read.

Submission Title:  Yes, Master
Category: BDSM
Author: chelle1979
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 6  Comment(s)

PErfect but please don't stop

all 8 ofthese stories have been great. the description along wiht the time line and games have been some of the best stories i have ever read. please do not stop.

Submission Title:  Four for the Handyman Ch. 08
Category: Group Sex
Author: spikysex
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 4  Comment(s)

Loved it

Great story and please ignore the hateful stuff that is sure to come once certain "types" discover this story.

Submission Title:  Denial: First Comes Addiction
Category: Transsexuals & Crossdressers
Author: TwistedThoughts
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 3  Comment(s)

Good Work to a point.

Let them all complain. I have enjoyed the series. I do agree that thing have gotten a little ... out of hand, I would ahve prefered that she stays more innocent and forced. I didn't care for her becoming submissive because she enjoyed it, and drinking the cum maybe a little much. If you continue please take her back to being an unwilling participant and maybe let the husband take some type of revenge like you did in the past chapters. The more willing she becomes the less I care for the story. In general I liked it.

Submission Title:  Tara Gets Taken Ch. 05
Category: NonConsent/Reluctance
Author: abedrako
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 4  Comment(s)

. . .

Yo bitch, Scouries is Lit's #1 POS (Piece of Shit). But you're not far behind what with being tied for 2nd with that POS wannabe Survivor winner. Don't quit your day job (whore).

Submission Title:  Pass the Panties
Category: Group Sex
Author: sarahhh
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 27  Comment(s)

I hope this story is true....I believe that it is.

I know a girl that lives in Western Massachusetts. I know her through work. Gabriella is very hot with the best ass I have ever seen. Since I read this story, everytime I see her now I picture her with her ass in the air while that guy in Maine fucks her from behind. I wish I had the balls to approach her and her husband. I would love to be the third party. I would spend hours licking her beautiful brown ass. When I talk to her now, all I think about is her naked with my cock in her mouth while she is getting fucked from behind by her husband. She has such a beautiful face. Her husband is lucky and awesome to share his wife's ass with strangers! How about sharing it with a friend. I volunteer !!!

Submission Title:  Stranger Gets Wife's Ass
Category: Loving Wives
Author: luckybastard
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 16  Comment(s)

The end reinforces the begging

Well written but you reinforced her total disrespect for a good man. He accepts her first time with Rudy but can't accept her second plannded tryst. He breaks it up and kicks the daylight out of her shallow whore-mongering lover who has disrespected both him and her. She suffers only after she is caught, and then after he leaves her so unfairly in her mind. Her Mother tells her she disrespected her husband and her vows. She attends her meetings and learns to understand why she disrespected her husband. Yet, she continues to disrespect her husband because he was not willing to forgive and forget her little mistake both before and after coming back. Then she tells him off and tells him to get over it because she has. No where in this story has she ever felt any true respect for her husband. They "Never" had a marriage as she never did anything but consider her own feelings, wants, and needs. She only really begins to care about her family and children after he leaves. I would have thought a so-called feminist wrote this story personally- because it was all about her! I realize it was just a story and you tried something different. But I think you demeaned yourself with this ending. I think a lot of cheating wives might love it as it helps them rationalize their feelings and justify their selfishness. The real and informative part of your story is that any cheating is a sign of disrespect for the spouse and the marriage! With your words as written- he never was a man who deserved any consideration for his pain. It was only about hers! Story or not- A lot of us readers learn a lot from these stories and depend on your wonderful writing to explain our own past and present feelings concerning our own problems. I have to believe that you all understand that? Is that wrong? I personally am 65 years old and have learned to understand many painful mistakes in my two marriages! Other than this ending- please keep up your lovely writing! thank you

Submission Title:  Rules of Marriage Ch. 04
Category: Loving Wives
Author: thecelt
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 98  Comment(s)

Just do your thing! ;)

I really did enjoy reading your story. And never mind those voices, that say it has nothing to do with BDSM. Most of all, BDSM depends on those living it, so everyone can live his/her OWN kind of BDSM. And to those who are submissive but rather NOT masochistic being beaten might as well be as much a punishment. I liked how you described their characters but to be honest, I didn't like the ending that much. I'd rather he stayed and watched her. Him walking away somehow implies that in the end she does not matter that much to him anyway. But otherwise: well done!

Submission Title:  Intro to BDSM
Category: BDSM
Author: tarquinius1968
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 5  Comment(s)

Dear Strange!!!!!!

If you seriously need "more explanation" and "some basis in fact", you have absolutely no imagination at all. Read another porn story instead. Thanks, BlueFish, for a great story.

Submission Title:  O Christmas Ball, O Christmas Ball
Category: Loving Wives
Author: BlueFish11
Comment By: KlausTheMaus
Submission Has: 6  Comment(s)

So funny

This was hilarious, very entertaining a fun read. ~onesugar~

Submission Title:  12 Naughty Days (of Christmas)
Category: Erotic Poetry
Author: ALSCOTSMAN
Comment By: onesugar
Submission Has: 8  Comment(s)

HOT AS HELL

your story is so HOT.

Submission Title:  Helping Out
Category: Gay Male
Author: nowiamhere
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 13  Comment(s)

Thankful for Sarahhh

Hot story that warmed me up. Hotter picture to keep me warm later. Great job Sarah. I am thankful for your beauty and many talents. You are the best! Have a Happy Thanksgiving! Len

Submission Title:  Pass the Panties
Category: Group Sex
Author: sarahhh
Comment By: lwt5203
Submission Has: 27  Comment(s)

i think the husband is sick

i think the unexplained rages which he never had before, and other problems are a sign the husband is sick - with maybe depression, or maybe a tumor, or maybe a hormone imbalance. but instead of doing something about it, she decides to be selfish, end their marriage, and have an affair. weak

Submission Title:  Watercolors Ch. 01
Category: Loving Wives
Author: johngalt47
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 6  Comment(s)

unsafe at any speed

Actually I liked it well enough until she was made to get in the car handcuffed.

Submission Title:  A Restrained Night Out
Category: BDSM
Author: anne_AlexD
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 1  Comment(s)

Began OK

But then just ZOOMED through the sex. You need to take your time, step by step, slowly building to a peak. Climb Mt. Everest in stages, don't arrive at the base camp and then find yourself on top without any explanation/description as to how you got there.

Submission Title:  Teasing
Category: Erotic Couplings
Author: Azuldrgon
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 1  Comment(s)

1. Pass the Panties

2. Taken By Moonlight Ch. 01

3. The Amazing Wedding

4. Loose Ends Ch. 03

5. Succubus Summoning 108

6. The Shopping Trip

7. Attempt to Spice it Up

8. She Grew Up So Fast

9. From Bathing Suit to Lawsuit

10. Soccer Moms Need Lesbian Love Too

1. Seven Days Ch. 03

2. Party Favor

3. Pass the Panties

4. Cheating Doesn't Pay

5. Whatever Comes

6. The Sisterhood Pact

7. Loose Ends Ch. 03

8. Loose Ends Ch. 02

9. Taken By Moonlight Ch. 01

10. The Santa Suit and Halloween

1. Damn Dress: A Love Story Ch. 10

2. Seven Days Ch. 01

3. Seven Days Ch. 02

4. Seven Days Ch. 03

5. The Small Brass Key

6. The Last Descendant Ch. 03

7. The Middle Case: Darkside 02

8. Party Favor

9. Back to the Farm Ch. 10

10. Seeking Advice

1. LeBroz
Comments Posted: 9,196

2. duddle146
Comments Posted: 4,504

3. don87654
Comments Posted: 2,730

4. KOLKORE
Comments Posted: 2,270

5. WickedEve
Comments Posted: 2,108

6. Amyfriend
Comments Posted: 2,086

7. sack
Comments Posted: 1,768

8. Nightowl22
Comments Posted: 1,724

9. Ronnie Wachuka
Comments Posted: 1,679

10. My Erotic Tale
Comments Posted: 1,559

11. gizzmo301
Comments Posted: 1,529

12. bornagain
Comments Posted: 1,435

13. My Erotic Trail
Comments Posted: 1,407

14. walkingeagle
Comments Posted: 1,286

15. peggytwitty
Comments Posted: 1,212

16. Alvaron53
Comments Posted: 1,174

17. Bridget69
Comments Posted: 1,103

18. Harryin VA
Comments Posted: 996

19. Tathagata
Comments Posted: 989

20. twelveoone
Comments Posted: 958

21. sherlock40
Comments Posted: 924

22. Maria2394
Comments Posted: 902

23. fakers51
Comments Posted: 854

24. msboy8
Comments Posted: 845

25. Bill Dada
Comments Posted: 835

26. Jennifer C
Comments Posted: 820

27. bruce22
Comments Posted: 800

28. Angeline
Comments Posted: 744

29. rgraham666
Comments Posted: 735

30. Syndra Lynn
Comments Posted: 726

31. Kanga40
Comments Posted: 725

32. jthserra
Comments Posted: 679

33. GW66
Comments Posted: 678

34. PEATBOG
Comments Posted: 665

35. cinnamon_kisses12
Comments Posted: 663

36. DesertPirate
Comments Posted: 659

37. My Erotic Tail
Comments Posted: 657

38. saw_man1
Comments Posted: 649

39. gatorhermit
Comments Posted: 637

40. Risq_001
Comments Posted: 634

41. dcpoet44
Comments Posted: 631

42. skip.69
Comments Posted: 617

43. annaswirls
Comments Posted: 611

44. asiaprof
Comments Posted: 609

45. txrosenaynay
Comments Posted: 597

46. David48
Comments Posted: 594

47. fumunda cheeze
Comments Posted: 588

48. RhymeFairy
Comments Posted: 569

49. YDD
Comments Posted: 568

50. doormouse
Comments Posted: 567