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Good series had something for everyone in it. Thanks for sharing. Any more chapters coming???

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by chytown less than a minute ago
Non-Erotic
SanityCheck

Like the originality of the storyline, and it seems there is another one going on in the comments.

Big Gov and Big Pharma in cahoots? Does anyone NOT believe that?

Back to the story, I am enjoying it.

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by dawg997 2 minutes ago
Loving Wives
cookingwithgas
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by Monagamous_Now 3 minutes ago
Loving Wives
dtiverson

Better and better!

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by Roti8211Chanai643 5 minutes ago
Lesbian Sex
annag98

Maybe run it through grammarly. There are lots of spelling and punctuation errors that make it almost unreadable.

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by tjreader 9 minutes ago
Incest/Taboo
Wendyxx

This is going to be one of my very favourite stories! Your writing is superb, the way you describe their daily activities, diving, swimming, lying on the beach, the photo shoot, sailing back from the Merc’s, the rough weather, the sex, brings back so many happy memories. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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by Woodencav 10 minutes ago
First Time
Mingemuncher

Can't wait for book 2. I don't know what direction you're planning to go with it, but I Ellis drops his horrid fiancee and asks out Carly instead.

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by jlmn 13 minutes ago
Transgender & Crossdressers
Jayleigh_Aura

Like others, I kept fearing some affair and breakup. LW can be monogamous. Great tale - 5.

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by 012Say 15 minutes ago
Loving Wives
laptopwriter

Good writing. Sneaky double twist ending. Worthy of Agatha Christie. 5

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by Prinzmettle 25 minutes ago
Incest/Taboo
NewIn57

Wonderful story. Even though the likely ending was telegraphed, I enjoyed every twist and turn of this love tale as I rode along on their romantic journey.

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by JoeBetterBNice 26 minutes ago
Romance
Harddaysknight

Beautifully written. Looking forward to Mindy's adventures. Can see her, with such a position of power, being potentially quite predatory herself.

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by BigrimmstalesToo 30 minutes ago
Lesbian Sex
Mindystarrdfw

Loved the first part of this story and the second didn’t disappoint either! Really looking forward to the rest. Excellent. 5 stars from me.

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by Sparkyblueone 30 minutes ago
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
TheNovalist

*****Good read. Thanks for sharing.

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by chytown 35 minutes ago
Non-Erotic
SanityCheck

Good story about a man that maintains his honor, the best he can, throughout his life. The best revenge is....

Thanks for the entertainment.

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by Behindbluis 41 minutes ago
Loving Wives
SouthernCrossfire

As to "clever premise's" issues, this wasn't a sex or stroke story; it is a love story. And with the prevalence of porn these days, one can know a lot without having the experience! Five Stars for quality.

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by Prinzmettle 42 minutes ago
First Time
AlexFourways

The setup was good, I'll save my comments for much later

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by dgfergie 43 minutes ago
Loving Wives
cookingwithgas

I enjoy your stories and love your characters!

5

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by Boyd Percy about 1 hour ago
Novels and Novellas
Texican1830

Silly, but I liked it. I thought the Gordons were going to become surrogate grandparents.

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by VeracityHeterodyne about 1 hour ago
Loving Wives
MattblackUK

I loved the story. I loved the writing. You were able to go into detail beautifully, without getting bogged down. (I have experience with other writers who cause me to skip wordy paragraphs. You were far from that.) Thank you. I hope to read more of your work.

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by Prinzmettle about 1 hour ago
First Time
AlexFourways

not sure that's how I would tell the girl who her father is and there should have been more time between reuniting and them getting together... possibly more of a reason for her running in the first place. All of that said, I did like this addon to the story.

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by Oatmeal1969 about 1 hour ago
Romance
Egregious

Such a wonderfully different perspective this time. A beautiful love story. Thank you.

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by jmcharl1 about 1 hour ago
Lesbian Sex
onehitwanda

I wish the ending was more satisfying and clear. Wasn't bad, just some weird motivations and actions.

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by Oatmeal1969 about 1 hour ago
Loving Wives
leapyearguy

@joebetterbnice your not the exception.

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by ibuguser about 1 hour ago
Loving Wives
blackrandl1958

Nah, hard pressed to stay when she was agreeing to him up next week with him Even after that scene.

In this one, better NOT to have that if they stay together. If you out that in... Staying for the kids is stupid... It'll screw them up worse often times. No role model for actual...

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by AllNigher about 1 hour ago
Loving Wives
BeBopper99

I enjoyed it. 5stars

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by Bronco56 about 1 hour ago
Loving Wives
LJA644

Clarification, I just checked, and Randi is on my list of a dozen favorited authors. This particular story just didn't work for me.

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by JoeBetterBNice about 1 hour ago
Loving Wives
blackrandl1958

General Order #1.... No alcohol. And a pregnant doctor would NOT have remained in theater that close to the fighting.

Come on! Research for at least a couple seconds

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by Laucaubin about 1 hour ago
Loving Wives
BillandKate

Hot, sexy and real. Great story 👏 👌

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by Hotstuff1P about 1 hour ago
Group Sex
AnotherOldWriter

Only there had been one more paragraph when she found he got her pregnant. No matter good story.

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by MtRseMan99 about 1 hour ago
Interracial Love
go4itnow

*****Looks like our hero is wrapping up a lot of loose ends. Good read thanks for sharing.

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by chytown about 1 hour ago
Non-Erotic
SanityCheck

Thank you @willyk1212. I appreciate your kind words.

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by AspiringAuthor about 2 hours ago
Romance
AspiringAuthor

After seeing the high rating this story was getting, and then reading the intro to this story, I was looking forward to something that was going to be a much better than average story. This did not turn out the way I expected. I had trouble following the characters on the first...

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by JoeBetterBNice about 2 hours ago
Loving Wives
blackrandl1958

Interesting.

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by usaret about 2 hours ago
Incest/Taboo
AssassinWolf

Your buildup made it real. Thanks...

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by Slick742 about 2 hours ago
Loving Wives
blackrandl1958

Another great story! I pushed myself slightly over the edge on this one, which is what I'm after. Then I can eat my cum and still be turned on

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by curious4cock about 2 hours ago
Transgender & Crossdressers
Feverdreams
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