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Submission Title:  The Discovery: Prison Inmates Ch. 05
Category: Gay Male
Author: poshbillionaire
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LOVING DOM

Would love to have my wife surprise me this way on my birthday. She could turn me into a sissy cocksucking faggot. Have me do cleanup on all and get used by any and all.

Submission Title:  Eventful Birthday
Category: Transsexuals & Crossdressers
Author: itchscratched
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A healthy 12-year-old girl has no trouble taking a full-sized adult cock; my daughter has taken over forty cocks now, from a nine-year-old boy's - her brother's - up to her seventy-year-old grandfather's thick and gnarled old cock and she comes loudly at least twice every fuck

Submission Title:  My Wife's Black Cock Initiation
Category: Interracial Love
Author: dave_jones_50
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What a Pair of Cows

These wives need to have their arses whipped sick cows

Submission Title:  Surprise Encounter Ch. 03
Category: Gay Male
Author: Bottom_up
Comment By: Anonymous
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Entertaining

I liked it - five stars worth. It didn't really follow JPB's story, especially since you made it seem like there was only one episode between Sally and Sam, and I doubt that JPB's "hero" would have been forgiving. However, JPB's hero was a wimp and didn't confront the guy in his own driveway, so as far as I'm concerned you had license to do whatever you wanted, and you did a great job of it.

Submission Title:  Sally's Trip to the Theater
Category: Loving Wives
Author: carvohi
Comment By: amyyum
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remarkably unerotic

Sorry, I found this off-putting.

Submission Title:  Just Going To Chat
Category: Loving Wives
Author: lookinaround88
Comment By: EspressoBolus
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As Usual...

I'm amazed that you're listed as a top author. Your dialogue is very juvenile, and your skills are kind of mediocre. I'm sorry, but this read like something a fourteen year old wrote. I guess when you're jerking off if you type... "Give it to mommy" that's enough to get marks. I wasn't impressed.

Submission Title:  My Mother's a Horny Drunk
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: lovecraft68
Comment By: Anonymous
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this s/b under dumb ass drug promotions genre

I'm sorry, but promoting drug use isn't cool in my book. I know, it's prolly hypocritical, but I agree with the others on this matter. None of that has to do with incest, sex, masturbation, and isn't needed to tell a story. Having used drugs for decades, I have never, and would never turn anyone onto drugs, especially my sisters!! It was my sister that got me started when I was 13, so I couldn't tell on her for getting high, along with the threat of a beating, and lying to my parents that I was high. I really don't care how I sound to anyone here, promoting drug use is unacceptable, IMHO.

Submission Title:  Double Trouble Ch. 01
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: PH03N1X
Comment By: Rigatony
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What does BTS stand for?

Eom

Submission Title:  Melissa and Roland Ch. 06
Category: Loving Wives
Author: chloejacobs83
Comment By: nonethewiser
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Really? Where's the revenge?

I'm not certain if I can continue with this storyline. The child abuse makes me nauseous and Clyde is demented. This needs to be wrapped up in 5 chapters or less. No more child abuse either.

Submission Title:  Lyndsay's Revenge Pt. 02
Category: NonConsent/Reluctance
Author: jadewinchester
Comment By: Cherrypeach
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"You may not understand that and I don't care if you do."

You're right, I just don't understand it. How can you see someone that's wronged you so, even someone you love, and not have that pain come back? How can you accept their tremendous mistake with hardly even an apology? How can you come back and accept the situation without making any stipulations of your own? I really just don't understand it. He accepts a situation in which he has absolutely nothing to gain. This chapter is probably the most important in the story, and it still answers nothing.<br /> <br /> I think we got a glimpse into the fact that he's a voyeur, especially since he seems to enjoy the photos on her phone. If that is the case, then fine, but sheesh... <br /> <br /> I think "it is what it is" perfectly describes this story. There really isn't any reason why he should accept this. And there really isn't any reason why she needs Jeff if she has Roland.

Submission Title:  Melissa and Roland Ch. 06
Category: Loving Wives
Author: chloejacobs83
Comment By: ephesios
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Sometimes

short, straight and to the point is needed. Sometimes long, and exquisitely drawn out is needed. Depends on the mood.

Submission Title:  WVC Ch. 15: The Cxld Art Class
Category: Exhibitionist & Voyeur
Author: gupiao
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There are no nagging doubts in my mind...

That this deserves a high-five

Submission Title:  Sometimes you have to...
Category: Erotic Poetry
Author: Oldbear63
Comment By: HoneyAdored
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Where is the revenge???

Your writing is excellent as usual, but I can't read this one. The child abuse is a stopping point for me. Where is the revenge????

Submission Title:  Lyndsay's Revenge Pt. 02
Category: NonConsent/Reluctance
Author: jadewinchester
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Great contrasting images, butters. Might return to comment again when I have more time.<br /> <br /> With apologies, I hit 4 instead of 5, if that matters to you(damn arthritic fingers don't always work!)

Submission Title:  the invisible man
Category: Non-Erotic Poetry
Author: butters
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