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some people --- in particular, some of the better writers here in Lit ---- thought this was a good story.<br /> <br /> this, to me, was like listening to a very clever 15 year-old talking about how good he was with his endless games from Xbox, Sony, etc. It's stiff, full of self-absorbing BS, and it involves mostly characters and events I could careless about....<br /> <br /> not only that, the dialogues our hero had with Amber, for example ---- a senior VP from a "megabank" ---- were just so unbelievably stupid and amateur. but the short dialogue with Millie was the most hilariously stupid...<br /> <br /> I honestly believed when our hero had a conversation with Amber's best friend, Millie ---- the one Amber usually gets together with, to get drunk, to have gangbangs with multiple men/strangers they pick up from clubs ---- and he said, "The reason I am asking you to talk to Amber is that I RESPECT YOU," I honestly believe he's doing a Steven Colbert or Jon Steward comedy and he's going to slap (figuratively speaking) the slut after the silly chit-chat, saying something like: <br /> <br /> "Bitch, I know you two are good friends; and I don't particularly care about you one way or another; but if you should AGAIN try to get Amber, supposed your best friend AND NOW MY WIFE into another one of these gangbanging sessions again, not only would divorce her immediately but I would see to it that Amber and you would NEVER AGAIN work in your line of work, with the kind of responsibilities Amber and you are trusted with...."<br /> <br /> But, anyway, to give the AUTHOR a little benefit of the doubt, WHEN WAS IT that Millie had earned our ex-Navy Seal (okay, second to last Navy Seal training drop-out)'s respect? Wasn't Millie the person his wife, Amber, said has been a bad influence on her their entire friendship?<br /> <br /> How fuckin' dumb a man has to be ---- especially if he's an "interim DA" ---- in order to have, TO BE GIVEN, such a set of dialogues by THE AUTHOR in a story like this?<br /> <br /> I know... it's only a story. I shouldn't be too critical of either story or author; for, as I said, this story sounds like a chatty, 15-year-old telling us how good he is with his various games. <br /> <br /> But it's NOT ENTIRELY unrealistic, in terms of characters and dialogues. <br /> <br /> The dialogues and exchange with the MORE SENSIBLE young lady Jen, former law school class mate, for example, were quite decently good and realistic. I would expect someone smart like her to have her reaction, when some idiot who's been fucking you some hours ago ---- who's not heard from his imaginary lover, Amber, for months and who called him 3AM in the morning ---- was frantically getting up and ready to go save her and her friend, Millie, from 4 drunkards AFTER they've fucked the whole night and now refusing to leave his beloved Amber's condo...<br /> <br /> Yeah, I expect a decent and smart person to have the SAME REACTION Jen had, too. It's like (with a look of incredulity), "You are fuckin' kidding me, right?"<br /> <br /> Anyway... yes, it's ONLY A STUPID STORY, as someone said...

Submission Title:  Mental Toughness Pt. 01
Category: Loving Wives
Author: amischiefmaker
Comment By: GenghisKhan
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You are not a serious writer

You are being disrespectful to your audience through your sloppy proofreading. Please use a grammar and spell checker or get a friend to edit.

Submission Title:  Yellow
Category: Gay Male
Author: ElonaHunter
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 12  Comment(s)

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For me it would have been a stop on the way home to a good divorce lawyer.

Submission Title:  Revenge in Advance
Category: Loving Wives
Author: edrider73
Comment By: looking4it
Submission Has: 9  Comment(s)

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Wow

Jacob is going to be in for a wild ride when Torie gets a hold of him. Poor John will find that Torie will never want a Yuengling beer and he will wonder why the well has dried up. Nice read.

Submission Title:  Tactile Dysfunction
Category: Loving Wives
Author: Quantified
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 2  Comment(s)

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First of all, if you have to verify then it is not trust, it's distrust.

Second: at its core this is about trust. You never let Sheldon ask the question: What if she was wrong? What if she tortured Sheldon and she discovers that she was wrong about the affair?<br /> <br /> As for trust, it is agreed that Sheldon can trust her. Trust her to lose her mind if she suspects him of adultery, trust her to want to hurt him physically and emotionally at the slightest hint of impropriety. He can trust that she's crazy because only an insane person would plan and carry out the torture she had in mind. And who can be married to that? What if she suspects him of cheating on her in the future? Will she do this again?<br /> <br /> Time for a divorce. She's not worth getting fisted for.

Submission Title:  Do You Trust Your Wife?
Category: Loving Wives
Author: edrider73
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 5  Comment(s)

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Thanks everyone!

I appreciate all the comments and feedback, I am working on a second installment and fine tuning this first one. This is my first shot so I know its a bit different and doesn't follow the nom for shifter etiquette but I hope those that read it enjoy my spin on life as a lady shifter and I promise to add some twists, turns and lots of spicy scenes in the next installment. Thank you all so much !! =]

Submission Title:  Lady Luna
Category: NonHuman
Author: morgabeth
Comment By: morgabeth
Submission Has: 9  Comment(s)

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Best story yet

I have been reading Literotica for over a year and this is the best story i have read on incest. Thank you Eroscott

Submission Title:  Parental Discretion is Advised
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: Eroscott
Comment By: Anonymous
Submission Has: 20  Comment(s)

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Mmmmm...

Technically all Amazons, but this story is all about social inequality. Rhada is a special case because a) she is a princess/high ranking Amazon and b) NO ONE wants to acknowledge the nature of their relationship as she would be shamed and Cael would be killed.

Submission Title:  Life as a New Hire Ch. 06
Category: Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Author: FinalStand
Comment By: FinalStand
Submission Has: 15  Comment(s)

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For now just a 1 *...

For now just a 1 *...I'll wait for the next parts, but the way showed here is more to become even worse...Let's hope not...

Submission Title:  Tactile Dysfunction
Category: Loving Wives
Author: Quantified
Comment By: impo_58
Submission Has: 2  Comment(s)

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I accidentally tapped 1 star I was meant to tap 5 sorry I know it's hard to believe but I was scrolling down and accidentally pressed 1 star

Submission Title:  His Heart at The Right Place
Category: Loving Wives
Author: likegoodwine
Comment By: Djsheng
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Welcome to Lierotica

O Poetess from South Africa !!<br /> -----from a staunch Nelson Mandela fan

Submission Title:  The cock block chronicles
Category: Non-Erotic Poetry
Author: Rambler012
Comment By: Ashesh9
Submission Has: 1  Comment(s)

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Today there are 2 South African Poets on Lit NP !! This really calls for a celebra-'shun !

What does mookameli mean in Swahili / Zulu , brother ? 5-ed .

Submission Title:  I love you
Category: Non-Erotic Poetry
Author: mookameli
Comment By: Ashesh9
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Billy sure got to have lotsa' 'citing sexperiences

,?!?! I Fived for Lil' Bill !!

Submission Title:  A Poem Billy Wrote in High School
Category: Non-Erotic Poetry
Author: greenmountaineer
Comment By: Ashesh9
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A lot of fun

I have to say I really enjoyed this humorous little erotic tale of dicks causing all sorts of trouble for our would be secret agent delivery boy. More, please!

Submission Title:  The Trouble with Dirk
Category: Gay Male
Author: sr71plt
Comment By: Anonymous
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Thank You, Thank You, Thank You

For being an anonymous nonentity I have surely made some inroads here and with another author as well. That was not my intention but, whatever happens does so for a reason, I guess, or so they say...<br /> <br /> I have loved every chapter of this story so far and I am sure to stay with it for as long as it lasts (should the quality maintain, of course). I personally like the banter between characters and appreciate the put-downs--intelligent creatures need to learn and appreciate a semblance of humility. Plus, trying to respond accordingly can keep the mind active and also helps with fitting in with those around you. Not only that but some of the comments are downright hilarious and I find myself laughing out loud at very inopportune times.<br /> <br /> I'm glad you have decided not to remove any more comments in the future. For posterity's sake I feel they need to be there. Newcomers need a sense of what has gone before, if nothing else than to give them an idea of what they may or may not want to add that might just cause something new to appear out of nowhere. Perhaps I am being overly-optimistic...<br /> <br /> Yes, there are still some blatant punctuation and spelling errors and a proof-reader would be a great idea. But don't let that deter you from still putting out the best read that you can. Nothing is perfect, no matter how high you strive.<br /> <br /> Roger.

Submission Title:  There Must Be a Mistake Ch. 06
Category: Novels and Novellas
Author: Prolonged_Debut10
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