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Good series had something for everyone in it. Thanks for sharing. Any more chapters coming???
All Comments/ReplyLike the originality of the storyline, and it seems there is another one going on in the comments.
Big Gov and Big Pharma in cahoots? Does anyone NOT believe that?
Back to the story, I am enjoying it.
All Comments/ReplyWell done,
All Comments/ReplyBetter and better!
All Comments/ReplyMaybe run it through grammarly. There are lots of spelling and punctuation errors that make it almost unreadable.
All Comments/ReplyThis is going to be one of my very favourite stories! Your writing is superb, the way you describe their daily activities, diving, swimming, lying on the beach, the photo shoot, sailing back from the Merc’s, the rough weather, the sex, brings back so many happy memories. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
All Comments/ReplyCan't wait for book 2. I don't know what direction you're planning to go with it, but I Ellis drops his horrid fiancee and asks out Carly instead.
All Comments/ReplyLike others, I kept fearing some affair and breakup. LW can be monogamous. Great tale - 5.
All Comments/ReplyGood writing. Sneaky double twist ending. Worthy of Agatha Christie. 5
All Comments/ReplyWonderful story. Even though the likely ending was telegraphed, I enjoyed every twist and turn of this love tale as I rode along on their romantic journey.
All Comments/ReplyBeautifully written. Looking forward to Mindy's adventures. Can see her, with such a position of power, being potentially quite predatory herself.
All Comments/ReplyLoved the first part of this story and the second didn’t disappoint either! Really looking forward to the rest. Excellent. 5 stars from me.
All Comments/Reply*****Good read. Thanks for sharing.
All Comments/ReplyGood story about a man that maintains his honor, the best he can, throughout his life. The best revenge is....
Thanks for the entertainment.
All Comments/ReplyAs to "clever premise's" issues, this wasn't a sex or stroke story; it is a love story. And with the prevalence of porn these days, one can know a lot without having the experience! Five Stars for quality.
All Comments/ReplyThe setup was good, I'll save my comments for much later
All Comments/ReplySilly, but I liked it. I thought the Gordons were going to become surrogate grandparents.
All Comments/ReplyI loved the story. I loved the writing. You were able to go into detail beautifully, without getting bogged down. (I have experience with other writers who cause me to skip wordy paragraphs. You were far from that.) Thank you. I hope to read more of your work.
All Comments/Replynot sure that's how I would tell the girl who her father is and there should have been more time between reuniting and them getting together... possibly more of a reason for her running in the first place. All of that said, I did like this addon to the story.
All Comments/ReplySuch a wonderfully different perspective this time. A beautiful love story. Thank you.
All Comments/ReplyI wish the ending was more satisfying and clear. Wasn't bad, just some weird motivations and actions.
All Comments/Reply@joebetterbnice your not the exception.
All Comments/ReplyNah, hard pressed to stay when she was agreeing to him up next week with him Even after that scene.
In this one, better NOT to have that if they stay together. If you out that in... Staying for the kids is stupid... It'll screw them up worse often times. No role model for actual...
All Comments/ReplyI enjoyed it. 5stars
All Comments/ReplyClarification, I just checked, and Randi is on my list of a dozen favorited authors. This particular story just didn't work for me.
All Comments/ReplyGeneral Order #1.... No alcohol. And a pregnant doctor would NOT have remained in theater that close to the fighting.
Come on! Research for at least a couple seconds
All Comments/ReplyHot, sexy and real. Great story 👏 👌
All Comments/ReplyOnly there had been one more paragraph when she found he got her pregnant. No matter good story.
All Comments/Reply*****Looks like our hero is wrapping up a lot of loose ends. Good read thanks for sharing.
All Comments/ReplyThank you @willyk1212. I appreciate your kind words.
All Comments/ReplyAfter seeing the high rating this story was getting, and then reading the intro to this story, I was looking forward to something that was going to be a much better than average story. This did not turn out the way I expected. I had trouble following the characters on the first...
All Comments/ReplyInteresting.
All Comments/ReplyYour buildup made it real. Thanks...
All Comments/ReplyAnother great story! I pushed myself slightly over the edge on this one, which is what I'm after. Then I can eat my cum and still be turned on
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