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Love your world building and plot. Thanks for posting!!!!! Anna might find herself in a difficult position.

Loving the story amazing build up

I love the teasing and the situations

Great read thanks

I wanna say one more thing I have a little above average size cock at 6 1/2 inches and 5 1/2 inches in girth, but compared to a cock on some of these porn stars it’s small. When I fuck my wife, I make her scream and squirt And have multiple orgasms. It’s not so much what you have...

great story 5stars.

Wasn't sure about the story when Wendy forced herself on Richard, twice. I had to put my disbelief on hold when Rich first held baby Susan and then later when they had some sort of connection when he went to visit. Deep breath, it's fiction and it can happen if the author wants it...

Finally coughed up your hairball and grew a pair. She still going to make you a bitch. If you don’t smarten up, you’ll end up getting both of you raped and brutalized and there will be no coming back from that deep dark hole. Nothing should happen without your explicit consent and...

what I really love about this story is that if it were posted anywhere but Loving Wives it would have 4.5+ for a rating. I really love that so many people come to these stories just to hate on them! It is soooo funny that they read them voraciously yet cannot stand them!! It's a...

True, another page or two would be lovelly, but very creative and intense.

I disagree with other commenters saying it's too complicated with all the rules and dares and everything. I love that about this story. However, I do agree that Alex needs to start facing more consequences soon. And I agree with the anon that it should happen online more so first....

that was a great story. Great sex, great story line, good development, pacing, the whole deal. Thanks!

Man! Talk about a change of venue! From Central and Eastern Tennessee to the far South Pacific. Wow, Go Big or Go Home, I guess.

I much prefer longer stories (I liken it to ONE potato chip), but this LITTLE gem managed to uphold the high standards we've grown to expect from this...

Hope another take is coming soon. Carol was fun!

I so enjoyed this, thank you! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Excellent story interesting characters with a cruel and twisted plot. I enjoyed it and will check out you other works. Five star effort.

kinda funny if he gets everyone pregnant

IT WAS GOOD......CINCO ESTRELLAS!

That was an amazing piece of storytelling. And you do this so quickly. How can you know so much about such diverse things? 5*s, easy.

His mistake has open door for her wildest dreams. Her fuck toy.

Terrific entry! Great tempo in describing a descent into an all-out carnal pleasure.

I don't normally complain about typos, shit happens, but the typos were egregious in this story. There were enough of them that I wouldn't be surprised if they were intentional to get back at complainers or the author has a different native language. It impact my enjoyment of the...

Well done. Honestly I think you should leave it as is. Let the readers contemplate the moral dilemma.

IMHO this would have been a better story without the 11 inch dick and climaxing 6 times after 5 the night before..

Very sexy!!! Cheers 🥂

Great story telling, as usual, love seeing more of your characters linking up and interacting with each other. I'm hoping this story spawns some longer stories like hearing more about Chad's family.

It says something about a story when the only criticism is about your grammar. :)

I 5 stared this thing YEARS ago. I generally hate reconciliation stories. But this one?

Man, I just keep coming back to it.

I also love all of your stories. I read them over and over again.

I truly wish my wife was like Carla because it is my dream and fantasy to have a hotwife who cuckolds me with many hot hunky lovers. I would fluff all of their cocks and guide them into my wife's wet pussy. Then I...

Not my cup of tea, almost swapping. 3*

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I was hoping for a conclusion to Blue Cobalt and his river property.

Thanks for this new chapter. I love this series!

Nice story only wish there was the risk of her getting pregnant.

I hope that after taking his virginity he starts going to the gym.

It would be great if she could mould him into a muscular man prior to him leaving for college

Great story and now I'll have to wait for my cook to soften.

HIV tests results don't happen that quickly but, it's a fiction story on a free site so I won't spend a lot of time on that.

Supposedly she got HIV from kissing the asshole in Monday. Well, Tom fucked Mary twice after she was exposed. If she could get it from a kiss wouldn't Tom's...

Desperately in need of a beta reader/editor to sort out the errors, that said the premise is not exactly virgin ground, more originality would have made it a lot better, as it is, it’s a variation on the script for the 1970’s “$6 million Woman/Man” & “Charlie’s Angels” but updated...

So far, so good. Thrre stars for now; I may vote it higher when the next part comes out.

I am enjoying this series immensely. I like that, for literotica, you are taking things slowly. She's going to be a lot of fun.