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Great Series........

Love this series, we enjoyed it very much.....a few times.lol.

Submission Title:  Loving to Like Ch. 02
Category: Group Sex
Author: BuckyDuckman
Comment By: dluvstoread
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good 1

wow what a story cant wait for part 2 well done and keep up the good work

Submission Title:  A Dish Best Served Cold
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: julybear7
Comment By: carsmike111
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TOTALLY Loving this series

Sure he's a pig and taking what isn't offered but the writing is excellent.<br /> <br /> Sometimes it's fun to just embrace the dark side.<br /> <br /> Great job!

Submission Title:  Toymaker Ch. 02
Category: Mind Control
Author: HandsInTheDark
Comment By: MasterDarkWolf1103
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Amazing

Another HOT story from start to finish! Your detail and description is excellent and can keep me hard and horny. Thanks for the fantasy!

Submission Title:  Our Last Summer
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: jasliz
Comment By: Nitehawk2Bear
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daddy get her knock up

Luv this story i was soo wet reading this. You should make her wake up in her room and every night she should think is a dream until she finds out she is pregnant.

Submission Title:  Dreaming of Daddy's Baby
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: LadyLeannan
Comment By: Anonymous
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Why does every sentence end in a question mark?

Have you seen this key on your computer? . everything can't be a question.

Submission Title:  Babs Was A Real Loving Wife
Category: Loving Wives
Author: qualitywheat
Comment By: Anonymous
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THERE ARE CONSEQUENCES, AND WHEN THEY COME.....

There are consequences to forcing your will on someone. Those consequences usually involve your wants or rights being denied in the long run. The consequences for rape to subdue a person are seldom good. I get the point in the story, but at no time do the perpetrators of dominance in this story get it. The only one who get's it is MIcah. Wade & Edwin are damn upsetting. In an effort to make his eldest son a responsible person and future Alpha, Wade allows Edwin liberties when he knows that in Edwin's heart he is a selfish mean spirited boy. That boy will get folks killed. His immaturity will eventually put him in a predicament that his strength will not be enough. The Tom's that are aware of his raping Rosie will not have his loyalty ever. Wade is misguided in his might makes right reality. The fact that he now has to fear his other son (Micah) is interesting. Maybe he always feared Micah, because the cage/rape/forced pregnancy/subdue was also a punishment for Micah. What kind of father/leader harms their obedient offspring for the sake of another claiming it was a threat to him and the clan. Rosie did go against what they all know as "safe" or right. Rosie has been gang raped for what a large part of her life. Why is that a suitable punishment by a leader that wants her to follow the "rules". Why Wade did not recognize this would be a test of his "alpha-ness" simply because the circumstances are so unlikely that it will test what he knew I have no idea. It's is like raping a gay person to make them not gay. We know that reality and how it works out. Giving a person a baby via rape does not make a mother out of the person in question, it just makes another unwanted person exist in the world. Well actually in certain cases the village does step in to take care of the unwanted offspring..., and in some cases the mother actually learns to care for the unwanted person eventually, but if anyone thinks that the child does not suffer some form of resentment even unconsciously - don't bet on it. It is beyond redeemable to set this in motion and expect to be given rights due an adult male/father/protector/advisor/confidant/ and or leader. Wade and Edwin have proven to all that they are not alpha material and are not staying..., not in the long run. Micah loves his mom and sister, but when the time comes I don't believe Micah will stay where he is a threat or the fact that his wants and needs are dismissed and his family is abused. Edwin is just sad, and when he get over his ego and bullshit and he realizes he has no rights and claims on this "baby" and possibly grows up.., I hope the thing that he most wants in the world other than to get out of his brothers shadow and to hurt Micah...., I hope the thing that he loves most or someone he grows to love...., he has to tell that he knowingly raped someone for spite. And see where that gets him. He needs to understand that his action has consequences and that he can be judged for his own misdeeds. Rape is a hard pill for me to swallow at all times. Rosie might be thick headed but all she knew for a large part of her life was deception. Why should she trust what she does not know especially when she has been manipulated her entire life. Good, bad or indifferent she has been manipulated. Everyone expects her to accept their rules when the only one who tries to accept her reality is Micah and then her brothers. Rosie is a test for everyone, but mostly she is trying to survive. I bet neither Wade or Edwin could have survived her existence. And as for the elder Werecat that advised he would have put Rosie down long ago..., doesn't that remind you of people who don't understand or want to deal with folks whom are different to them due to gender, color, trauma, disabilities..., hide them, get rid of them, we don't want to deal with you - go away. This story gives a reader a lot to think about. When I read this chapter I was physically feeling sick. It is your story to tell, but God - can you find a level of peace for this? I know life is not always rainbows and candy, but Rosie and Micah's story is heart wrenching. It is not fair for me to ask for you to make it nice, but if you could find a truly just ending I would like to read it. Somehow life's lessons must be learned. What if someone put Jazzy in a cage and let anyone in? They only seem to care about her. What if it was Marrisa? What if Edwin looked pass what his brother is doing and goes out to find a real mate and she is denied him due to his past behavior regarding his brother and Rosie and is judged for it by someone other than his father. Consequences when you force your will on someone are seldom what you think they should be. What if the child if born hates you when they find out the truth. What if the child is born not "perfect' in your eyes, should you put it down too? Who should you trust to love it? This is a powerful story. It evokes all kinds of emotions. I take back my request. Tell your story how you wish, it's yours. But I really want everyone to learn a heartfelt lesson. The only ones who seem to be feeling pain are Rosie, Micah and her brothers. Seriously there seems to be a need for the "adults" to learn their own heartfelt lessons too.

Submission Title:  To Love a Stray Ch. 11 Pt. 02
Category: NonHuman
Author: Mygypsy
Comment By: Anonymous
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groan

really? definitely a farce.

Submission Title:  A Dish Best Served Cold
Category: Incest/Taboo
Author: julybear7
Comment By: Anonymous
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Love the story - hate the title

Story moves along well, really enjoyed some of the visuals, title doesn't do the story justice though, you should work harder on that, it's important - like naming a child. You took a very promising first child here and named him Eggbert.

Submission Title:  Probe is a Synonym for Exploration
Category: Anal
Author: Sojournalist
Comment By: Anonymous
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Brilliant

That was fantastic I do hope you are going to resurrect all the Wendy stories and give them this treatment

Submission Title:  Wendy Celebrates The School Pantomime
Category: Illustrated
Author: Hopebeach
Comment By: Jonlogger
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Untitled Comment

Well written story about the boss and his younger, very sexy assistant, about a marriage that had lost something important. The wife will be furious when she figures out that Tony is looking elsewhere, but maybe she will pass by a mirror and look to see what is reflected there?<br /> <br /> I suppose you could write another chapter, but we all know there are only two possible endings. Someone is going to get hurt in either case, because that is the way of the world.

Submission Title:  Tomorrow is So Far Away
Category: Romance
Author: andsunshine
Comment By: Sidney43
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Marvelous!

This is classic writing, worthy of publication in our most prestigious magazines. But when MaryAnn adds sex it becomes erotic beyond belief.

Submission Title:  Adultery, the First Time
Category: Erotic Couplings
Author: MaryAnn678
Comment By: Anonymous
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'ATTAGIRL !!

A spankin' hot read !!

Submission Title:  Secret Rendezvous
Category: Erotic Poetry
Author: elphaba69
Comment By: Ashesh9
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Wonderful!

Doesn't get any better than this!

Submission Title:  Sophia Pt. 01
Category: Loving Wives
Author: CastleStone
Comment By: bluepillow
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HOT, HOT and very Smoking Hot

Great start, I look forward to reading Part 2, more fun with Kara in Amy's basement and then of course, Amy's class presentation where Kara is exposed to her professor and class!<br /> <br /> Maybe have Kara move in with Amy..

Submission Title:  Dominated by the Camera
Category: Lesbian Sex
Author: lustfuldesires
Comment By: andyMassage
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